1st Explosion

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May 10, 2009 12:22 AM #415790
I just made this in about an hour and a half, still not done completely.

Need some Critiques on it though.

http://www.truploader.com/view/798497

Plez and Tank ya.
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May 10, 2009 12:50 AM #415811
Wow. Its actually really good. Maybe some more colors?
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May 10, 2009 12:52 AM #415813
Quote from BluGil
Wow. Its actually really good. Maybe some more colors?


Hey, thanks! Do you mean more variety in the red or different colors like blue, green, etc.?
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May 10, 2009 1:20 AM #415832
u have a geed style :D
and the explosion is awesum!!!

and is that double framed?
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May 10, 2009 1:22 AM #415835
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u have a geed style :D
and the explosion is awesum!!!

and is that double framed?


Parts of it are. Thanks!
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May 10, 2009 1:31 AM #415842
your first? are you serious? oh shi.....

orsum <3
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May 10, 2009 1:35 AM #415843
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your first? are you serious? oh shi.....

orsum <3


Haha, thanks! Well, its my first explosion. I have done smoke before.
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May 10, 2009 2:49 AM #415890
I mean different shades of red, maybe including yellow/orange.
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May 10, 2009 2:57 AM #415895
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I mean different shades of red, maybe including yellow/orange.


Ill try that tomorrow, thanks!
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May 10, 2009 3:03 AM #415902
i don't have the patience to work on an explosion for 1 and a half hours.

it looks very good for a first.
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May 10, 2009 3:07 AM #415905
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i don't have the patience to work on an explosion for 1 and a half hours.

it looks very good for a first.


I just suddenly got into one of those moods where you want to animate something good and you are going to do it no matter what. So I decided to do an explosion.

Thanks!
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May 10, 2009 5:02 AM #415929
Eh. actually i like your style of the more simplistic use of colors, it makes it look really clean. I say stick with that. Maybe try adding some shrapnel and debris though
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May 10, 2009 8:52 AM #415960
The dissolving was okay, but it was way too slow, the color mixing was good, but the colors will still unrealistic (explosions aren't just a full red with different shades of red).

BUT, if this were for a POOF, (like a magician dissapearing), it would be great.
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May 10, 2009 11:02 AM #416008
MY god thats cool...
but uh... seriously 1 and a half hours...
i would've crawled into a ball and died by then, i have little energy for such things
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May 10, 2009 2:03 PM #416139
Quote from BluGil
Eh. actually i like your style of the more simplistic use of colors, it makes it look really clean. I say stick with that. Maybe try adding some shrapnel and debris though


Alright, I will stick with this and fix it up, thanks!

Quote from Plague
The dissolving was okay, but it was way too slow, the color mixing was good, but the colors will still unrealistic (explosions aren't just a full red with different shades of red).

BUT, if this were for a POOF, (like a magician dissapearing), it would be great.


Alright, thanks!

Quote from jadony
MY god thats cool...
but uh... seriously 1 and a half hours...
i would've crawled into a ball and died by then, i have little energy for such things


Haha it isn't that much time really, it goes by fast. Thanks!