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Foda

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May 10, 2009 1:38 AM #415846
http://www.truploader.com/view/902035



please if you say crap tell me how i can improve.
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May 10, 2009 1:40 AM #415848
Nicely done! I would add a little more blood though. Not enough particles for me.
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May 10, 2009 2:14 AM #415873
Needs lots of easing.
Smoother movements.
More fluidity, that's for sure.
Movements need much, much more force.
You need to learn to pace movements; they're too quick and have no flow between them.
Blood was pretty bad; particles did not really have gravity applied and was drawn badly on the ground.
The broken wall pieces did not bounce and had no physics.

Keep working, I can see you getting the hang of it sooner or later. Really.
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May 10, 2009 2:18 AM #415876
Quote from Omega
Needs lots of easing.
Smoother movements.
More fluidity, that's for sure.
Movements need much, much more force.
You need to learn to pace movements; they're too quick and have no flow between them.
Blood was pretty bad; particles did not really have gravity applied and was drawn badly on the ground.
The broken wall pieces did not bounce and had no physics.

Keep working, I can see you getting the hang of it sooner or later. Really.





holy s*** that is a lot of stuff to do but thank you for the information.