My New Song : Oceana

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May 24, 2009 11:30 PM #424299
Hey, tell me what you think. I really need some feedback!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eYShJSVq2Pw
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May 24, 2009 11:37 PM #424300
You a quite good voice, but I didn't like the guitar track. It's too boring after a while, you should put some more variation into it I guess. Do you have any decent recording equipment? I'd be interested in doing a little collab with you.
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May 24, 2009 11:55 PM #424303
Yeah, I can agree it's awefully repetative, and the solo is just something I came up with in five minutes, not very good. And no I don't have any decent equipment, my equipment consists of the old digital camera I recorded the video on. Thanx for the response!
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May 25, 2009 4:05 AM #424367
You really like that barre chord pattern don't you

Your voice more or less sounds like the guy from Linkin Park if he was bored out of his mind. Good effort but I really don't like anything about this.
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May 25, 2009 6:39 PM #424926
dude the song good could use some work but nice man