Mesmays Threadless t-shirt

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May 25, 2009 2:01 PM #424706
http://www.threadless.com/critique/44738/NecroDuck

What do you think?
What can I improve on.
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May 25, 2009 2:40 PM #424731
Maybe slide the duck a bit more to the middle of the shirt.
And if this would hang in the stores , i would not buy it.
Its so dark and evil.
Bit Gothic 2.

Idk what your goal was.
But if it is a darkish stile u have succeed!
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May 25, 2009 3:39 PM #424765
Halloween duck.
I think you could improve its feather, it doesn't look like a feather to me.
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May 25, 2009 6:05 PM #424891
How can a shirt be threadless D:

well you could improve it's position, either to the lower right or the middle.

love it
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May 25, 2009 6:06 PM #424894
Fair points. But regarding the feather thing- it was actaully based off a rubber duck initially. Which is probably why it looks that way.

However if it looked wrong I suppose its still something worth changing.
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May 25, 2009 7:56 PM #424977
it looks creepy 0.0. And how do you make a t-shirt Threadless? Srsly - is that even possible?
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May 25, 2009 8:38 PM #424991
i wuld to tally buy this!!!1
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May 26, 2009 7:33 AM #425318
Move it opposite of where it is. That's pretty much the only thing you can do. So that it's "looking in" instead of "looking out"
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May 26, 2009 12:33 PM #425416
indeed, it should be rather at the right side looking left.
and maybe you should either get rid of that shades beneath it or add a bit blood pool looking LIQUID and not that stroky.

nice one i think. too many shot holes for my taste ^^