4 hit combo [EM]

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May 29, 2009 9:48 AM #427336
Yeah.

So I finally decided to get back to flash.


Saha's mentoring me and Blot(Terc), and he told us to make a 4 hit combo.

http://www.truploader.com/view/033053

Here goes nothing.
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May 29, 2009 4:13 PM #427542
The first and the last punch: it looked like he's hitting a invisible wall or something.
There's not much forcing in the anim.
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May 29, 2009 4:50 PM #427574
Okay thanks.

I'll try to improve :D

Anyone else?
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May 29, 2009 5:03 PM #427581
Normally when you openly state someone is mentoring you in a thread, people become less bothered to crit you.
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May 29, 2009 5:06 PM #427584
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Normally when you openly state someone is mentoring you in a thread, people become less bothered to crit you.


Oh really?


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May 29, 2009 5:09 PM #427585
Yes, the proof is in the pudding. Look at blot's thread.

I'd say you particles need work on. They need to fade slower.
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May 29, 2009 5:17 PM #427589
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Yes, the proof is in the pudding. Look at blot's thread.

I'd say you particles need work on. They need to fade slower.


Gee, okay, okay, thanks.
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May 29, 2009 8:18 PM #427702
It looks very EZtoonish. The effects are just lines, which isn't the best style, in my opinion, unless you can really get them. And I think some trails would help the force, but its just fine in my opinion. And the movements are all there. Good job overall.
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May 29, 2009 8:41 PM #427729
Quote from doc
It looks very EZtoonish. The effects are just lines, which isn't the best style, in my opinion, unless you can really get them. And I think some trails would help the force, but its just fine in my opinion. And the movements are all there. Good job overall.



Thanks.

But no, I
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May 30, 2009 1:14 PM #428209
This looks somewhat similar to my combo >:|
Which means that it's awesome in some ways, lol.
I see some wobblyness in the whole body, and the follow through for all of the attacks look too fast and awkward, imo. If you want to keep up with this style, you're going to have to work on your consistency.
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May 30, 2009 2:52 PM #428261
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This looks somewhat similar to my combo >:|
Which means that it's awesome in some ways, lol.
I see some wobblyness in the whole body, and the follow through for all of the attacks look too fast and awkward, imo. If you want to keep up with this style, you're going to have to work on your consistency.



Thanks alot, man :D


Yes I think I'll keep this style :P