http://jadony.deviantart.com/art/sauri-samurai-girl-in-yellow-124210401
don't ask why its in yellow, im color blind and i got bored of black and white drawings
i didn't spent overly that much time on this and i am not entirely happy with the results
comments and stuff are greatly appreciated
Skirt samurai
Started by: jadony | Replies: 15 | Views: 1,536
May 30, 2009 3:03 PM #428280
May 30, 2009 7:45 PM #428507
Her ass cheeks overlap each other.
May 31, 2009 8:45 AM #428833
That's true.
May 31, 2009 8:43 PM #429326
Her face looks like it was hit with a shovel and someone ctrl-t'd her eyes and pulled as far as the earth will reach.
And the skirt was not even tastefully done :[
And the skirt was not even tastefully done :[
May 31, 2009 10:20 PM #429354
What the **** is wrong with her face?
Seriously, a good drawing ruined by huge eyes, better clean all that make up and take the girl away from clinical trials.
Seriously, a good drawing ruined by huge eyes, better clean all that make up and take the girl away from clinical trials.
May 31, 2009 10:30 PM #429359
One leg is a little on the fat side imo.
We've only been pointing out flaws as far as I know, don't be discouraged by criticism, just fix it next time. (＾▽＾)
We've only been pointing out flaws as far as I know, don't be discouraged by criticism, just fix it next time. (＾▽＾)
Jun 1, 2009 7:10 AM #429554
lol it was like 1am when i did this and it was freezing so i didn't expect anything but this sorta criticism...
im working on a new style atm and this was more of an experiment
im working on a new style atm and this was more of an experiment
Jun 1, 2009 8:01 AM #429567
body is great, hair is great, arms and clothes are great, legs are almost great (left leg is a bit fatter then the right one), sword is great, but I don't like the face... the eye is way too big, nose is too pointy. The cartoony style doesn't fit with the realistic style used for the rest of it.
Also, I like the yellow theme, looks good
Also, I like the yellow theme, looks good
Jun 1, 2009 3:38 PM #429697
I only like the hair...
Jun 1, 2009 4:25 PM #429734
Quote from jadonyim working on a new style atm and this was more of an experiment
wtf. you don't need to work on some random manga overused japanese style.
just google it.
Jun 3, 2009 11:15 AM #430903
Quote from Karthagowtf. you don't need to work on some random manga overused japanese style.
just google it.
lol
when i started out drawing manga early last year i googled it... it helps for beginners only really, the rest it leaves for u to develop your own i found...
and what do u mean by overused...
Jun 3, 2009 12:26 PM #430908
Go to deviantart, find a random member, and there is about an 90% chance it will be some 14-16 year old who draws anime-styled sketches.
That's overused.
That's overused.
Jun 3, 2009 1:26 PM #430927
You say you're color blind...but know it's yellow?
Jun 3, 2009 2:45 PM #430954
overused doesn't mean bad.
And my dad's color blind but it only affects blue and green or something like that.
And my dad's color blind but it only affects blue and green or something like that.
Jun 3, 2009 5:26 PM #431006
Quote from jadonylol it was like 1am when i did this and it was freezing so i didn't expect anything but this sorta criticism...
im working on a new style atm and this was more of an experiment
Why does everyone here have to use some lame excuse for every bit of criticism they get? Whose fault is it that you decided to make a drawing at 1:00 in the morning in freezing weather?