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Jun 1, 2009 5:30 AM #429543
This is a little teaser of a project i am currently working on. Dont worry bout the little stuff... i'll get to fixing that soon:

http://i671.photobucket.com/albums/vv76/Gloryroad211/Teaser.gif

Basically just wanna know what people think so far and any advice is appretiated. Im still pretty new to using this so im eager to hear what you think :)
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Jun 1, 2009 9:43 AM #429589
hi,
the camera effects in the animation are very well. almost all effects are graet. what i dont like so much is who to "victim" is standing. the particles from the laser are nice and i am surprised by the high frame rate.
i hope you dont give up and go one with this project.
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Jun 1, 2009 11:00 AM #429609
Quote from honk
hi,
the camera effects in the animation are very well. almost all effects are graet. what i dont like so much is who to "victim" is standing. the particles from the laser are nice and i am surprised by the high frame rate.
i hope you dont give up and go one with this project.


So do you think i should maybe make the try and jump away or take a different stance. The reason he is unmoving so far is because the first robot is gonna go into like a scan mode and see that he is still there, unmoved kinda thing.
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Jun 1, 2009 12:01 PM #429627
ahh ok, i dont know the whole story. i only want to say that usual a person lift the hands or make a solid step, but maybe that guy is a robot or superhero.
anyway, thats a good animation.
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Jun 1, 2009 12:09 PM #429630
Ok i fixed the guys stance:

http://i671.photobucket.com/albums/vv76/Gloryroad211/Teaser2.gif

Is that better?
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Jun 1, 2009 12:11 PM #429633
in my opinion: yes.
wow man you are fast :D it looks more natural.
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Jun 1, 2009 12:15 PM #429636
WOW MAN
can you add tits to the victem plsss
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Jun 1, 2009 12:21 PM #429639
KK ill bump the thread up after i have done more. Till then be teased by the teaser ;)
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Jun 1, 2009 1:40 PM #429654
Just quickly, do you like the way the guy comes out of the clouds or should i redo... personally i feel its lacking a bit.

http://i671.photobucket.com/albums/vv76/Gloryroad211/Test.gif

I'll happily read your suggestions in da morining and make updates later tomorrow. Till then please any input is Great! ;)
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Jun 1, 2009 3:50 PM #429718
Whoa, this blew me away, if you keep this up, this could be one of the best easytoon animations ever.

The way he comes out of the clouds is good.
Just keep it up dude.
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Jun 1, 2009 8:02 PM #429813
hey glory :D
i like it but dont think the "dust" should be so solid. you can play more with that.
for example: first the head is free then the shoulders but there is still some dust between his neck...here is a quick example(i make it very blowzy)
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r297/EmiR_2007/robodust.gif
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Jun 2, 2009 2:32 AM #430070
Ispiration get.
Awesome you!!
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Jun 2, 2009 5:16 AM #430148
Quote from honk
hey glory :D
i like it but dont think the "dust" should be so solid. you can play more with that.
for example: first the head is free then the shoulders but there is still some dust between his neck...here is a quick example(i make it very blowzy)
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r297/EmiR_2007/robodust.gif


Yeah i totally agree. What i did was a bit rushed and yeah iv fixed it since then ;) Yours is cool :D
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Jun 2, 2009 1:04 PM #430246
pls make me one update the victem must have tits plSSSSSSssss
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Jun 5, 2009 11:24 AM #432528
Heres a little update to show u that im still working on it :)

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Oh and feel free to let me know what you think ;)
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