Girl In Dress

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Jun 6, 2009 1:15 AM #433136
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Probably the biggest pain in the ass ever was to draw that ****ing dress.
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Jun 6, 2009 5:04 AM #433288
It looks really good :D i love how you dont put faces on the people it looks really cool. Only comment is that the shine on her arm and the black lines in her pit are too sharp against her skin. Tone them down
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Jun 6, 2009 5:12 AM #433298
I know why you don't give them faces ;]

If you didn't use a reference, that's really good. The shading is really awkward though and the black lines in her armpit don't connect to anything and look like a mistake.
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Jun 6, 2009 9:33 AM #433378
No face.
The dress is way too long.
The hsding wasn't so good, but nice work.
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Jun 6, 2009 4:03 PM #433693
Quote from Bonk
I know why you don't give them faces ;]

If you didn't use a reference, that's really good. The shading is really awkward though and the black lines in her armpit don't connect to anything and look like a mistake.


I never use a reference.
But I bet it wouldve made the drawing a hell of a lot easier.
I hated every second of making this drawing.
I dont even know why I finished it to be honest.
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Jun 6, 2009 11:12 PM #434009
the shades are quite displaced.
those folds are sure decent for not using any reference but you really should to really understand drapery.
her right arm looks flat.

plus you really shouldnt avoid drawing faces just because you're not as good at it. if you were'nt going to anyway (do you focus on fashion?)
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Jun 6, 2009 11:24 PM #434023
Also the right hand's fingers should still wrap around a bit and have a bit of them showing on the front of her dress.
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Jun 7, 2009 6:55 PM #434834
Honestly guys, this is an abortion in my mind.
I hated drawing it, and every single thing about the final product.
I wonder why I even bothered finishing/posting this shit.
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Jun 7, 2009 8:19 PM #434917
Honestly, you really shouldnt post it if you dont want people to speak out their thoughts concerning it. Just keep in mind what we said and try to improve things.

By the way, i have done several drawings hating every second since some moment and the product. But still you can learn from these.