The obSTICKal Course of Death

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Jun 11, 2009 2:32 AM #437308
I made this...
http://kf22.deviantart.com/art/The-obSTICKal-Course-of-Death-125505572

Here it is on youtube if you can't get it to load... but the quality suks :(
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rwwIY4DZJ6g

Tell me what you think
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Jun 11, 2009 6:20 AM #437374
Wow, that must have taken you a long time. Nice job. Pretty basic, but entertaining.
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Jun 11, 2009 10:11 AM #437410
Lol that was great, very entertaining
I remember seeing one of these before
I can't really think of much wrong with it, maybe you could add a few more reactions in places, like when he falls into a gap, he could try jumping out or something, make it even more entertaining
and the blood could use some work
you could also crank the fps up a bit, and add more frames to make it smoother and a better quality

it is a very solid animation though
great work
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Jun 11, 2009 10:22 AM #437412
I like the style. It was a little slow in the beginning but it got better towards the ending. You have to work on your sticks... they're very stiff and maybe a bit too thick. Good job though. ^_^
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Jun 11, 2009 12:31 PM #437440
I actually enjoyed it.
It's not fantasticly animated, but well done :).
I knew the [insert colour here] one was gonna win.
I noticed him pervailing in almost every one where he was focused on :D

Well yeah Good job.
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Jun 11, 2009 12:39 PM #437443
ya should work on the animation
but besides that it was pretty cool
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Jun 11, 2009 4:35 PM #437535
i love this style of animation. and im so glad to have seen this. it reminds me so much of the long retired artist icantcolourin.co.uk and those were my favorites. and this is almost equal. thank you so much for making this.
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Jun 11, 2009 4:40 PM #437539
Cool idea.
I likes it :D
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Jun 11, 2009 4:45 PM #437541
Wow, cool. It had a storyline.
The quality wasn't the best, but nice one.
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Jun 11, 2009 5:06 PM #437553
Quote from power fuse0
I actually enjoyed it.
It's not fantasticly animated, but well done :).
I knew the blue one was gonna win.
I noticed him pervailing in almost every one where he was focused on :D

Well yeah Good job.


Probably should edit your post so it doesn't ruin the animation by telling us who wins...
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Jun 11, 2009 5:41 PM #437567
Quote from genocide
Probably should edit your post so it doesn't ruin the animation by telling us who wins...


Done

Now you need to edit yours :)
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Jun 11, 2009 5:47 PM #437570
Nice. The movements weren't so great, but it was a long animation and very well done. weren't you that guy that made bungie jump of doom or something?
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Jun 11, 2009 6:34 PM #437597
Yeah, overall the actual animation wasnt great, the movements were definitely off. But it was very entertaining nonetheless. And the music fit great too. And i also like how there were some sticks that were nice and others that were total jerks, added a nice touch.
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Jun 11, 2009 7:09 PM #437622
Hah, not the best animated, but it entertained well :D
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Jun 11, 2009 8:41 PM #437653
Yeah, reminds me a lot of icantcolourin too. That's great, there should be more animations like this.

Lookin forward to part 2.