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this 1 dosent suk to bad lolz.

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Mar 29, 2008 8:05 PM #105159
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Mar 29, 2008 8:31 PM #105180
i liked the other one better that you posted but its still good, work on the smoke
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Mar 29, 2008 9:30 PM #105254
Some of the effects were good and some were bad. In other words, LEARN TO HATE SMOKE! lol just kidding, but the smoke was pretty bad, it needs to fade as it desinigrates and it doesn't desinigrate like that. The lightning was a nice touch, but could have been better. The ending was really nice, you definitely have the basic movements done, even though there weren't any real movements, but I doubt you could do this and not know how to walk, lol. I like the teleporting. I'd say you're really close to high beginner. Just make another longer animation, a bit smoother, this standard, you got high beginner. Also, don't use smoke at your skill level.
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Mar 29, 2008 11:59 PM #105388
you have to practice camera movements just a bit when he zoomed in threw the guy it looked off
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Mar 30, 2008 1:04 AM #105427
Image i made it betah lolz
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Mar 30, 2008 2:46 AM #105493
Still pretty good, the bandana sucks though, that smoke was really good, but only on the part when the guy was sliding, THAT'S how you need to do it. If you were smoother, you would get High beginner for sure
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Mar 30, 2008 4:33 AM #105600
I think some of those effects are pretty good.. But you really need to work on easing, But thats ok, Keep it up =D Med beginner
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Mar 30, 2008 6:18 PM #105968
it was btretty cool but im only a noob
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Mar 30, 2008 8:02 PM #106074
Nice zoom in on his ass.
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Mar 30, 2008 10:36 PM #106217
Thats a pretty good work in progress but I would ditch special affects for a bit and work on basics a bit, other wise you will have on hell of a time getting to intermediate.
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