Do you like my animations?

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QWERTZ

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Jun 22, 2009 1:40 PM #445492
Well im new to these here forums.
I just wanna see what you guys think of my animations?


BIOLOGICAL CONTROL
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THE HEAD COLLECTOR
~ Don't Judge this one, It's terrible.
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SHAPESMEN
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poppetje3D
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Jun 22, 2009 1:52 PM #445494
Yea i like em xD
Especially the 1 one xD
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Jun 23, 2009 7:06 AM #446059
Well could you give me some CC?
I wanna get better, :)
thank you
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Jun 23, 2009 4:30 PM #446398
The blood on the first one needed a variety of particles instead of just the linear ones.

Also, I think your upper bodies need work on the stiffness. There obviously wasn't any for the first and third, but the middle one wasn't so good, like you said, and I think it might be because you haven't had the upper-body practice that most people at your level would have done.

btw, what settings were you using for the first one? It looks a higher frame rate than I've ever successfully uploaded. I could only notice the blood things because it was lagging so badly while it loaded - most blood it would be obvious.
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Jun 23, 2009 7:39 PM #446536
I liked the first one haha, I didnt really like the way the blood came out in the second one.
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Jun 23, 2009 11:41 PM #446694
cool. but at this point i dont think you should have that many scene changes, you should make the scenes longer in between the words. and yeah, i did think the first was at a higher frame rate. maybe you should try moving the camera more instead of just going to a black screen when you want to change scenes.
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Jun 24, 2009 11:42 AM #446939
The top one is normal frame rate. Why does it look faster?
and yeah the blood does look horrible.
I'm not good.
How do i do good blood?
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Jun 24, 2009 12:42 PM #446953
Just practice it.
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Jun 27, 2009 6:01 AM #448957
there very cool l like the third one the best today i made some little short pivots here they areImage

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Jun 27, 2009 6:27 AM #448975
Those were aweful, kidkick, and don't post your anims in other people's threads.
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Jun 27, 2009 2:39 PM #449123
your animations r cool qwertz