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Jun 23, 2009 12:07 AM #445798
Well I'm going to atempt to easytoon again, not sure if it'll work out, but we can only hope right?

getting back to the basics;
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and trying something new;
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Jun 23, 2009 5:12 PM #446422
wow..............
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Jun 23, 2009 5:24 PM #446433
Second anim: the leg and arms were very stiff, it was kind of short, but since it was only basics, doesn't matter. A bit more particles perhaps? Or were you aiming small?
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Jun 23, 2009 10:42 PM #446651
I was only really trying it out, but yea looking at it now only really the one leg moved. I'll work on it a bit more.

Any C&C for the first one?

[EDIT - added punches and eyes]
[EDIT - new anim]

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It was good until the second kick, then my animating skills failed me. Train wreck ensues. . . ToT
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Jun 24, 2009 5:04 AM #446817
First anim: The first few steps were kinda weird. For the rest nothing.
second anim: It has become wobbly on the end, the leg mostly.
third anim: The leg was very stiff, third kick was off :(
And I think that when you get kicked hard enough to get some force around you, you fall by the first time :P
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Jun 24, 2009 5:37 AM #446834
Yay! lots of C&C!
Yea the steps looked weird because he was turning around while moving, i guess it was kinda unclear.
I think I'll just keep working on the new style.

[EDIT]

Just made this;
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As usual, it started good, then, well . . . *fails*
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Jun 24, 2009 5:17 PM #447087
that running one was good, and it hasnt failed just finsh the spin, and make it really fast, and itll look fine. but i think youve improved since i last saw you
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Jun 25, 2009 6:01 AM #447459
fixed the kicks! yay!

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Jun 25, 2009 7:04 AM #447476
Yeah kicks are much better now. I like your style its very fluent. I have a bit of the same trouble in that my animations start good then decrease in rythm. I find the best way around this is to simply leave it when your satisfied with the good bits then come back leter... maybe even another day to add more.
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Jun 25, 2009 7:58 AM #447497
I know exactly what you mean! O.O
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Jun 25, 2009 9:10 PM #447805
yeah that happens with most of my pivots. they start great and then get suckish. my eztoons just suck the whole way through :)
and i didnt see any difference in the kicks, they were all incredible.
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Jun 29, 2009 5:32 AM #450337
Well since my last one was kicks, this one is punches . . . fast punches . . . too fast . . . *Eyes bleed*

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had to change it to 7 fps, was way too fast.
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Jun 29, 2009 7:18 AM #450386
I'd like to see what you're capable of when you have the person fight back.
Even if its not good, I'd like to see how it turns out.
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Jun 29, 2009 7:26 AM #450393
Hmm ok, I'll give it a try.
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Jun 29, 2009 8:00 AM #450411
I always loved your animations. Welcome back XD
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