second brush animation

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torque

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Jun 24, 2009 3:06 AM #446780
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1245813151

It's another running loop that i made, go ahead and tell me if it's better than the last one

Here's the last one
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1245114423
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Jun 24, 2009 3:39 AM #446789
the running in both is quite weird
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Jun 24, 2009 3:58 AM #446799
The first one is better, and the only thing wrong from that zoomed out is you have an extra frame when he is taking off from his step. Take out the first airbourne one, and then perhaps compensate by moving the leg further forward in the frame before.
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Jun 24, 2009 4:12 AM #446805
yeah, the first one's better. The thing that bugs me is that there's a sudden tilt back with the head which makes it look not as good as it could be.
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Jun 24, 2009 4:48 AM #446812
Ok Thanks For The Tips
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Jun 24, 2009 7:34 AM #446894
Just make him glide and sync into the steps :)