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Jun 29, 2009 1:50 AM #450187
im new here, and well here is an amiation. c&c
and yeh, it doesnt really have too much of a story line


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Jun 29, 2009 2:29 AM #450221
Kinda needs more frames and the punches need some anticipation.
But your FBs not that bad. Their bodies are a little wonky and the running part was terrible but the animation has potential. ending particles were nice too. (but not the explosion ones)
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Jun 29, 2009 3:10 AM #450237
running looked super odd
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Jun 29, 2009 4:14 PM #450616
draw more frames individually ! :O
they'll look more ... human .
its hard work .. yes , but its better than a static human .
add more details for the eye . there's too much blank space .
try to " decorate " the blank space with something .
a black frame?
other parts of the face ?
tones ?

Practice and have fun
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Jun 30, 2009 7:11 AM #451002
for me the animation is fine. the only problem is that i dont understand whats going on :(
you should try to make the story more claer to understand before you start to draw more frames inbetween.
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Jun 30, 2009 2:32 PM #451100
I didn't get the point. Don't do fullbody animations unless you're really good at EzToon.
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Jun 30, 2009 6:38 PM #451239
Quote from Avian
I didn't get the point. Don't do fullbody animations unless you're really good at EzToon.


what else he should do? hahaha
me, for example... i can not make good stick figure but good fullbodies, or lets say it in this way: my fullbodies looks better as my sticks. and imo this is good enough to go one with this.
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Jun 30, 2009 8:05 PM #451298
not that good bro, dont draw directly, use anatomy structures then after finishing the animation, add the details.
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Jul 1, 2009 2:43 PM #451647
ok, thanks everyone.
it looked better to me before, now it looks......ok i guess.
obi 1 i realized i should have done that now, and i i will for the future, so thanks
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Jul 8, 2009 2:37 AM #455255
Its a human animation. make a stick figure version and also, i dint acctually get whats going on your animation.
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Jul 8, 2009 6:16 AM #455323
Alright, who let the narutard in here?

Its called Fullbody, FB for short. Just because this is stickpage doesn't mean every single little animation has to be sticks duking it out. Drawing FB shows skill, something you don't have. Admitedly, Ace's anim isn't that great but at least he can actually animate.
And so, Mister Narutard, How about you stop telling people what to do and go fap over some NarutoxSasuke fanfics or make a another Naruto AMV to linkin park.
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Jul 15, 2009 1:38 AM #459768
atleast ace knows how to draw good eyes :P