I made an anim for once, and here it is

http://filebox.me/view/jmtnas8bh

CC, I want to get better!


Heres another (terrible) one:
http://filebox.me/view/emgaf8a9u

The run is too fast and not dynamic enough. Also the jump just looks like a step. the roll is good though. Make sure the speed changes occasionally, not just constant.

Thanks, I also made this one.

http://filebox.me/view/urwcrvj0j

He should be in the air more in between steps for the run. Also, he jumps off of the building, stops completely, then starts sliding. Imo, there shouldn't be a complete stop when he lands if he is going to slide like that. I liked the jumps though

I originally made them jump higher, but think about it, when you run-you actually dont leave the ground that much.

You do parkour?

Nope . I don't live in an area with much of...anything...besides houses.

But you're in the air for a bit longer than that. And the arms don't look like they move much.

nice easing.
make it more slower

First one, make the jump over the gap more obvious.

Second one, he stops before he slides, with the momentum he already had he would just instantly slide.

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First one, make the jump over the gap more obvious.

Second one, he stops before he slides, with the momentum he already had he would just instantly slide.

Okay, thanks man.