This is my Collab that never made it but you can watch my part.

It was rather choppy, the menu looked surprisingly good for a first flash movie so I was a little excited that it might be good, but I was as usual, wrong. The movie lacked really any action, it was unclear and choppy and the filter effects really maid my eyes strain to tell whether it was blood or something else, the end was undefinable, and I suggest you use VCAM to zoom in and out of scenes, if you improve on these things you will get more than my 2/10... good luck!