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Jul 5, 2009 9:09 AM #453762
http://www.truploader.com/view/222217

Please give me critique.
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Jul 5, 2009 9:17 AM #453764
That was great, it really fits. Can't find anything to crit. Sorry.
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Jul 5, 2009 9:17 AM #453765
pretty awsome, but his head looks to thin imo.

also on the second step his hand thats infront looks kinda wierd
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Jul 5, 2009 9:20 AM #453766
Yes, I also noticed the head should be just a bit thicker or the brush a bit thinner. Thanks for the heads up.
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Jul 5, 2009 10:05 AM #453784
Great, there's no need for C&c
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Jul 5, 2009 10:23 AM #453788
Seriously? Thanks allot Tawnik, means allot coming from you : )
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Jul 5, 2009 5:02 PM #453904
Np, btw CoD 4 seems to be working again, yay.
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Jul 5, 2009 5:11 PM #453911
That was good man!

Head doesn't really seem to fit the whole animation, though.
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Jul 5, 2009 5:14 PM #453912
That has been told already, thank you though.

Tawnik, keep watching your PM box <3
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Jul 5, 2009 8:55 PM #453997
He said the thickness wasn't right, I mean the shape of it and all isn't right.
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Jul 5, 2009 8:58 PM #453999
It wasn't very detailed or anything and I think it was a bit choppy, but other than that, great work.
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Jul 6, 2009 2:10 AM #454158
People are doing fullbodies like a fat stick person. Try and add a lot more detail. thats what fullbody is about. Even if you can only successfully animate like a second's worth of stuff, itll look way better if you can get a detailed, colored, and smooth animation.
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Jul 6, 2009 2:26 AM #454170
What blugil said.
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Jul 6, 2009 7:00 AM #454279
It is only like 6 seconds and a loop? You should have the common sense to think this was a test. I'm not drawing clothes on the character in every frame when it's a test.

I see what you mean by the way, Pepsi, I agree with you completely. Thanks allot for noticing.
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Jul 6, 2009 7:01 AM #454280
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We don't mean clothes and things we mean try not to just draw a fat stick figure, add facial features, ect.
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