need name but is good...

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Jul 16, 2009 9:30 PM #461121
hello well, now i made an animation but i need help i will uploead to NG but i need a song, and CC and I don know what to put in the so... help, how i can improve the animation?

http://filebox.me/view/tgc1y7n5t

and i need a good song can you help me?
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Jul 16, 2009 10:26 PM #461206
Don't upload that on Newgrounds. That is all.
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Jul 16, 2009 10:27 PM #461211
Um CC
-Really quite stiff
-Effects were meh (I'm horrible so those looked decent to me)
-Work on walking

Song
-It's not really long enough to have a song I think
-But... Bonito by Jarabe de Palo, perfect :)

I also don't think it's long enough to be on NG anyways
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Jul 16, 2009 10:33 PM #461217
The effects are only filters. So basically he was being a filter whore.
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Jul 16, 2009 11:04 PM #461245
I'm terrible at animating so, the only thing i'm going to comment on is the conversation they're having with each other. All the periods after the words got annoying and it was just...so..cheesy.

Also, at the finishing punch to the guy, his arm extended like the guy from Fantastic Four.
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Jul 17, 2009 6:20 PM #461888
me gusto pero le falta mas fluidez cuando aterriza de un salto
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Jul 18, 2009 4:53 PM #462429
ehhh... thnaks but i uploaded to NG and add some things so... there it is

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/503818