His left leg looks off, I think. It just doesn't seem like a part of his body. Besides that,

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Still loving it.

I've gone ahead and added some scenery... primarily because the page felt sort of naked before.

Sorry for another double post... I decided to color Alex since it's his first actual appearance in the series. Enjoy.

The back leg still seems off, like it's too big or something.

My god, I thought you'd never actually make this. Amazing so far, I can't wait for the comic versions of all those stick animations you did for this a few years back.

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The back leg still seems off, like it's too big or something.

I'm not sure I understand what you mean. It seems like just the right size to me... since he's squatting...

could you draw some lines on it so I know what you mean exactly?

..and thank you dino, that means a lot =)

I really hate manga, but it's good to know that you found something to be entertained on.

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I really hate manga, but it's good to know that you found something to be entertained on.

Hah, thank you! .... I think?

Also Max I think I see what you're seeing now.

In picture three Serius' sleeve looks like a giant hand (see the thumb and four knuckles). Also, while you shaded Alex's hand really well, there's no shadow separating the hand from the forearm, so maybe just extend the shadows at the edge of the hand and create a wrist?
/nitpick.

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Hah, thank you! .... I think?

Also Max I think I see what you're seeing now.

Glad to read such a nice piece of information.
This is exciting news.

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In picture three Serius' sleeve looks like a giant hand (see the thumb and four knuckles). Also, while you shaded Alex's hand really well, there's no shadow separating the hand from the forearm, so maybe just extend the shadows at the edge of the hand and create a wrist?
/nitpick.

Actually, now that you mention it, that is very bothersome.

I might have to change these knitpicky things. =)

Dear FrozenPhoenix.

Continue drawing this comic or I will to awful things to innocent people.

Bumpy bump.

Added another page, I've also rewritten all the dialogue to make it less terrible.


ENJOY! More coming soon.