like usual its short... but i took more time in it... hopefully i got better :D

Not bad. It looks a little wobbly, but that's fine. You should work on adding more anticipation before punches, and it'll look a lot better.

spiffy's right, anticipation and smoothing is needed but you have potential. It also needs a tad more easing and resizes a bit. But I'd say that if you improve on that then you can post outside the beginners. Maybe try using a thinner stick to practice? A size 2 brush works best when your starting off.