Please Rate my animations, and criticize so i know what im doing wrong.
Started by: SlayerZaxy | Replies: 28 | Views: 849
Jul 18, 2009 8:44 PM #462530
Put the walks in a fixed camera (this is where the stickman moves across the screen and the camera doesn't move.) Make sure that the planted foot stays in the same place on the ground while it's leg straightens in midstep.
Jul 19, 2009 2:17 AM #462714
Quote from leedonPut the walks in a fixed camera (this is where the stickman moves across the screen and the camera doesn't move.) Make sure that the planted foot stays in the same place on the ground while it's leg straightens in midstep.
i agree it makes it so much easier to learn to walk
Jul 19, 2009 8:29 AM #462820
Quote from SlayerZaxybefore, after
It's back was really stiff. Download a stickman with a joint on it's back.
Check a walking tutorial (Zed's walking tutorial).
Jul 20, 2009 11:31 PM #463662
this is my fail attempt at a kick

Jul 20, 2009 11:53 PM #463678
Quote from SlayerZaxyAm i still a beginner, and can you tell
me what is wrong with these?
Ur pretty good for using pivot, i used to use that but i sucked:Dope:
Jul 20, 2009 11:53 PM #463679
and this, is my fail punch attempt, go on, get to know them! 

Jul 20, 2009 11:54 PM #463680
yeah, but im not very good. its hard as hell though!:Smile:Quote from littledudeUr pretty good for using pivot, i used to use that but i sucked:Dope:
Jul 21, 2009 12:34 AM #463715
epic fail kick! FAIL ROAD RAILROAD! *TOOT TOOT* 

Jul 21, 2009 12:36 AM #463718
another crappy kick, whats wrong with it? 

Jul 21, 2009 12:55 AM #463739
3rd attempt, plz tell me whats wrong! 

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Jul 21, 2009 9:20 AM #463998
or post in beginner section or make ur on thread dont go posting ur animations on some1 else his thread
Jul 21, 2009 9:38 AM #464006
Quote from CronosXIIIHere are some tutorials that teach you about some of the basics:
Walking - http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1210533611
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1202042067
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forum...d.php?t=104748 (recommended)
Running - http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1202041766
Punching - http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1202041618
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forum...ad.php?t=85413
Kicking - http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1202041549
When you get better at them, i want you to check out these:
Stiffness and Easing - http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1202041872
Throwing - http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1210533663
Small fight - http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1202036132
Now, here is a link to a thread containing many of the best pivot tutorials:
http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=7164
And here is a link too possibly the most well known tutorial out there:
http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=22662
To summerise what you need to work on, i believe its safe to say you need to work on everything. Make sure you move every joint in every frame and take time to use more frames. Learn all of the basics before you try more advanced animations.
Good luck.
Tutorials by: Fraz, Nev, Baha, Zed, Pf0 and many others.
What a nice guy. Really, though, read those tutorials.
Jul 21, 2009 3:26 PM #464124
Quote from SlayerZaxy3rd attempt, plz tell me whats wrong!
The size of the animation's wrong.
Jul 22, 2009 10:16 PM #464867
this is probably my best kick, and i was wondering if i should have done a tremor effect... 

before, after
Am i still a beginner, and can you tell
me what is wrong with these?