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Sword swing, Hand Detail !! :)

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Jul 22, 2009 8:11 PM #464795
http://www.truploader.com/view/987045
http://www.truploader.com/view/558285 faster version

Yeah,
I love Lixu because he told me to try out line again.
I love Mesmay because he's so epic and he told me to animate the hand itself.
I'm also in love with one girl, that means Im not gay.No, Im not.Sorry.

24 fps, 1-2 hours, just a few frames :|
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Jul 22, 2009 9:21 PM #464846
And you love me because of my honesty.

Could have been better, the fingers look like they got smaller, and the sword didn't look that good. You should do full body animations IMO.
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Jul 22, 2009 9:35 PM #464852
Something didn't look...right...for some reason.

I dont know why :/
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Jul 22, 2009 9:43 PM #464856
Arch-angel, yeah, true, smaller thingers, I've noticed that too, but didnt feel like fixing it.And how come this isnt full body ?

Shanto, did you click the link ? Okay, that was a joke, bad one, but well, try to concentrate and tell me whats wrong =)
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Jul 22, 2009 10:34 PM #464873
the spin should be faster, cause now he is just flooting to long in the air
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Jul 23, 2009 8:29 AM #465047
It's just a hand and a sword. There is no color to the animation, and the outline doesn't look that good. I think you should go back to animating actual figures or actually try animating a person.
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Jul 23, 2009 9:44 AM #465060
http://www.truploader.com/view/558285 Faster like this ?

Arch-angel, I want to focus on hands, because hands are really important, even if you animate the proper fullbody, your comments are good, but please, try to give me some solution, you arent afraid to tell me that you dont like the animation, but as I see you cant give me anything else :|
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Jul 23, 2009 1:28 PM #465126
Oh hey, an animation with 4 different drawings, nice!
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Jul 23, 2009 1:56 PM #465142
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Oh hey, an animation with 4 different drawings, nice!


what ?
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Jul 23, 2009 7:26 PM #465294
Well, I just see 4/5 different hands but then animated with free transform tool, rotating it. But it looks really good so that's very impressive and inspiring.
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Jul 23, 2009 7:31 PM #465297
Great, actually you see 10 drawings =) Im glad you overlook my precise work xD
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Jul 23, 2009 7:43 PM #465300
Awesome job, I think. It must cost you a lot hard work, but it's IMO really good (I'm talking about faster version. It was something wrong in slower... But I really don't know what o.0).
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Jul 23, 2009 10:37 PM #465426
did u used to make sticks?
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Jul 23, 2009 11:49 PM #465477
It works for me
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Jul 24, 2009 1:23 AM #465537
There really isn't that much to say. It was a short animation of a hand moving a sword around. There isn't that much to comment on. You might like this better:

The physics on the sword suck. The weight of the blade would cause the sword to actually fall instead of just flipping. The hand needed to raise up a bit before flipping the sword. There is no value of weight in the animation either. This goes along with what I just said. You should make the sword look heavier by adding more anticipation and more motion. It looks weightless right now.
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