ok,it's not finished,this is my second animation (in progres)

I need of you to tell me what can be fixed , and how do you like it so far

http://filebox.me/view/g0theqht6

Sticks lines WAY to thin.

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Sticks lines WAY to thin.

fuk I knew it,and he's so gay now

thank you for replaying

Replying*

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No problem.

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Replying*

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No problem.

yes no one do that :)
when some one sucks

The stick looks kinda weird.. the background looks kinda weird.. everything looks kinda weird. I mean.. The wheels aren't even connected to the truck-thingy, and the physics are way off.

But I guess I'm just hating it (no offence) just because you're using a different type of style.

Still I'm curious about how this animation is going to end. Hmm. Weird.

yes I see,so what would you change to make it better
but the stile stays sameone

The BG looks unpolished, I see that you are going for a more for a sletchy style, but it doesn't look pretty. I suggest you colour in all the white pieces of the bg. Another option is to blur it, I don't mean to blur the ground, but blur the bg, this method is used when the bg is not really used in the animation, so I don't know if you plan on having the character interact with the cloud, but you could see what happens if you blur it.

You should add a V-cam, I zoomed into the stick and I saw all the detail that you put into the truck, if your going to work on the project at 200% or 400% zoom, things are going to look small, so if you add a V-cam it will add personallity.

The stick resized a bit when he stood up and pointed to when he was running, if you use view the grid when you are animating it helps you measure the stick and keep size consistancy.

The trucks movements were rather eratic and uncontrolled, it would've looked good, if it wasn't so choppy, perhaps you should add more frames of movement and get the tires more involved.

Sorry for the long reply but I hope this helps. It looks good so far, especially for a second effort. Good luck with it.

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The BG looks unpolished, I see that you are going for a more for a sletchy style, but it doesn't look pretty. I suggest you colour in all the white pieces of the bg. Another option is to blur it, I don't mean to blur the ground, but blur the bg, this method is used when the bg is not really used in the animation, so I don't know if you plan on having the character interact with the cloud, but you could see what happens if you blur it.

You should add a V-cam, I zoomed into the stick and I saw all the detail that you put into the truck, if your going to work on the project at 200% or 400% zoom, things are going to look small, so if you add a V-cam it will add personallity.

The stick resized a bit when he stood up and pointed to when he was running, if you use view the grid when you are animating it helps you measure the stick and keep size consistancy.

The trucks movements were rather eratic and uncontrolled, it would've looked good, if it wasn't so choppy, perhaps you should add more frames of movement and get the tires more involved.

Sorry for the long reply but I hope this helps. It looks good so far, especially for a second effort. Good luck with it.

Socks you don't know how many helpful words you put in this reply

just the answer that I needed
thank you