A project

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Aug 14, 2009 9:11 PM #474572
Just the first little screens. I will be animating it of course.
http://www.truploader.com/view/371465
Why am I posting such a short project? Because I'm going to be updating this, then in the end submit it on newgrounds and what not. It still has a lot of mistakes, and to be honest, I don't like it just yet.

Updates: clickable
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[SIZE="6"]Also, what's with all the noobs lately! Gosh!![/SIZE]
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Aug 14, 2009 9:26 PM #474582
Screenies looked like bleach action :S
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Aug 14, 2009 9:28 PM #474583
it looks pretty good but yea i would like to see the finished version with less mistakes im hopping also the head was kinda off it didnt really close at the top
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Aug 14, 2009 10:19 PM #474601
Quote from kingsmash
it looks pretty good but yea i would like to see the finished version with less mistakes im hopping also the head was kinda off it didnt really close at the top

Oh lmao, wrong link. I updated it :/..
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Screenies looked like bleach action :S

It's supposed to :D
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Aug 18, 2009 4:17 PM #475866
Quote from Rival
Screenies looked like bleach action :S

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Aug 18, 2009 7:48 PM #475928
Looks all right.
When you draw the hand grabbing the other one, draw em further away from the wrist, it makes the fingers look very very thin.
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Aug 18, 2009 9:49 PM #475967
looks good, could be a nice project, but no thanks =)