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Aug 20, 2009 4:56 PM #476727
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Monk Combo 1
http://img231.imageshack.us/i/0abc.gif/

Monk Combo 2 ( Favorite )
http://img200.imageshack.us/i/000000000 ... 0000k.gif/ If it dosent work , go to the * on this page

Monk Tennis Ball
http://img148.imageshack.us/i/monk3.gif/

Monk Walk
http://img197.imageshack.us/i/monkwalk.gif/


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Soz bot background i messed it up AND the end lol
Credz to whoever made the sticks.
C&C PLESH.


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Aug 20, 2009 5:22 PM #476745
BUMP
Cmon guys COMMENTS
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Aug 20, 2009 5:24 PM #476746
Why only monks?
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Aug 20, 2009 5:26 PM #476747
Cos I wuz bored CMON USEFUL COMMENTS
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Aug 20, 2009 5:27 PM #476749
You can't bump something that's the latest on the section :S
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Aug 20, 2009 5:37 PM #476755
Can I Have Some Damn C&c Plz????!!!!????
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Aug 20, 2009 5:39 PM #476757
Fine
The "Newest" One, at the beginning, the arm swing needs to be redone from the way he goes into a run.
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Aug 20, 2009 5:43 PM #476759
Rank? Plz more C&C
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Aug 20, 2009 5:45 PM #476760
Rank for Newest: 6.45/10.0
For the Monk tennis ball I can tell you that the back elbow when he throws the ball up, comes up very sharply and doesn't look good. Try getting a ball and throwing it up in the air.
Feel how the back arm is positioned while looking at the ball while it's in the air. Then try your position. It's impossible and makes your animation look like it's without proper human physics. For the First and second combo, I'll say just delete the first one and rename the first one your second. The second combo is suppose to be in "Favorite" right? If not, your Monk Combo 2 doesn't exist.
Ranks:
First/"Your Favorite": 6.9/10.0
Tennis ball: 7.35/10.0
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Aug 20, 2009 5:49 PM #476762
Uh... Is that med beginner?
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Aug 20, 2009 5:58 PM #476763
Hmmm... Idk... depends what I am...
You have ease and have somewhat knowing of how to walk forward...
You have knowledge of several fighting moves such as punch and kick and palm...
I give you a low med beginner with a more of med
MY LIST
LOW LOW BEGINNER
LOW BEGINNER
LOW>MED BEGINNER<-- Me Probably
LOW And so on
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Aug 20, 2009 6:09 PM #476767
K, more comments plz
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Aug 20, 2009 6:17 PM #476773
I'll just rate the newest one : 6.5 / 10.0 (or 10)
The walking is weirdo.
I think the stickman shouldn't move while in the air while doing the aerial kick.
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Aug 20, 2009 7:16 PM #476792
Quote from Velosareon
Hmmm... Idk... depends what I am...
You have ease and have somewhat knowing of how to walk forward...
You have knowledge of several fighting moves such as punch and kick and palm...
I give you a low med beginner with a more of med
MY LIST
LOW LOW BEGINNER
LOW BEGINNER
LOW>MED BEGINNER<-- Me Probably
LOW And so on


Stfu.


You are med beginner , and stop with the heavy spacing.
It doesn't look good.
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Aug 20, 2009 9:28 PM #476826
If you're going to use heavy spacing so much, you need to do a lot more easing. I think every frame you have is good (except the ball one; I'll come to that in a minute) but there need to be many more frames inserted into each animation to anticipate the movement ever so slightly and to follow through out of it. That will trick the eye into seeing accelleration instead of a picture jumping from one thing to the next.

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This made me cry. I cannot emphasise enough how much you need at least 9 frames per stride on a walk. Again, what's there is fine but add another two frames in between every existing one.

On the tennis ball you do have easing. Ironically you put it in the one place you didn't need it - laterally. The ball needs to remain at a constant speed in relation to the ground. Vertically it will slow and then come down again, but it should never stop completely, and yours did.