Unchained [TBC]

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Jousteh
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Apr 4, 2008 8:34 PM #109465
So yeah.

I started to animate it like 2 months ago and I ran out of ideas and then I took 1 month break of it >.<

And now I've decided to remake it.

Heres what I've got so far:

http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=97912025183~Unchained_anim_intro.swf

I'll add the names of chars later + will fix the blue guys landing on the ground.

C&C
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Apr 4, 2008 8:44 PM #109477
without a V-cam or over-exaggeration most of the moves looked really really weak. The pause thing or the guys fall once the pause ended also looked really weird.
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Apr 4, 2008 8:46 PM #109479
Sweet. Yeah fix the guys landing... it didn't look right. But anyway, the punch was awsome, the blood looked cool. Keep anmating good animations.
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Apr 4, 2008 8:48 PM #109480
Quote from stickdudenick
without a V-cam or over-exaggeration most of the moves looked really really weak. The pause thing or the guys fall once the pause ended also looked really weird.


Actually, I was thinking of adding a V-cam.

Thanks.
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Apr 4, 2008 9:38 PM #109497
The text is too fast.

It's hard to read it, before it goes away.

ITS NICE THO
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Apr 4, 2008 9:49 PM #109498
Quote from strills
The text is too fast.

It's hard to read it, before it goes away.

ITS NICE THO


Read more books young boy, to improve your reading skills. :]

Okai. Later will fix that.

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Apr 4, 2008 10:32 PM #109526
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Read more books young boy, to improve your reading skills. :]

Okai. Later will fix that.

Thanks.


I second that...STRILLS!!! REad more books!!! lol nope just joking, i know you can't be bothered.

anyway, it was good, the background looked very good and the fighting does need a little bit more impact but it's getting interesting, keep it up
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Apr 4, 2008 10:50 PM #109540
Quote from strills
The text is too fast.

It's hard to read it, before it goes away.

ITS NICE THO


Wow. text was perfect =P really perfect speed. unlike your animation :O lol jk. >_>

I liked it alot, don't see alot wrong with it. Fall could be betta I gues.
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Apr 6, 2008 1:11 PM #109761
I know Ssjb, about the fall. :]

Thanks for comments.
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Apr 7, 2008 4:18 PM #110516
that was amazing <3
the text was perfect, read everything, get some new eyes strill >_>
lol i love the idea and the concept of the freeze thing.
nice one hope it goes well :D
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Apr 7, 2008 4:45 PM #110537
Quote from zombpiv
that was amazing <3
the text was perfect, read everything, get some new eyes strill >_>
lol i love the idea and the concept of the freeze thing.
nice one hope it goes well :D


Thanks.
I hope it will go out well too. :]
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Apr 7, 2008 6:09 PM #110572
Quote from Joust
Thanks.
I hope it will go out well too. :]


Lol, isn't that obvious for any animator?
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Apr 7, 2008 6:11 PM #110573
I have seen ones who give a **ck about how good the anim is turning out.
Lol.
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Apr 7, 2008 9:38 PM #110635
aw i liked the older intro better :c
its no problem though, im still looking forward to it :D
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Apr 7, 2008 9:46 PM #110638
Very nice intro!

The very movements were pretty cool! though when the animation started it kinda seemed a bit too slow compared to the song, but still i'm assuming that its going to kick up a bit over time! STILL! very nice, can't wait to see the final product :'D!