I don't often make music, and i just felt like making some tonight. im quite tired and i don't think i can carry on for much longer without going to bed, and since i havent bought a copy of FL i can't save it for later, so i'm just going to upload what i have and see what you guys think

http://www.tindeck.com/listen/bhvl

be gentle, and any criticism is definitly welcome

It was good.

I don't know much about synthesizer music but it was very catchy and I wish 'download' didn't just take you to a quicktime page. Good job I hope you keep making more.

right click the download and go on save link as

and i'm glad you both like it:Happy:

Didn't really like the pauses or the sections with nothing but the beat, it was too minimal for that to really work. And when everything plays at the end it sounds kind of odd, like they're clashing or something.

It's okay for an early attempt, the last thing I'd call this is experimental but to each his own I guess.

Yeah, I don't like the pauses either. Fill them in with some pads, arps, gates, something. The melody was good, very catchey. Like the synths, and the drums were good. Keep making more.