like i said on Pivot Stories

its good, but the trigger could have been more exciting

trigger?
its mah first time ^.^
im lieking.

...umm...bumpmuch?

god...post, people...

The explosion expands real slowly at first but then branches off pretty fast. I don't like the disappearing effect of the explosion at the end, it's to fast. It's better than my first explosion, and it was my 12th animation. Nice job.

okay taaaaa.
im making another.

It expanded too slowly at first, so it didn't look like there was much force behind the exlopsion. Besides that, it was kind of wobbly, but it's very good for your first easytoon, much better than mine.

its pretty good but it was kinda slow.
it shoulda either expanded slow like u started it or fast like u ended it.
it just didnt look right to me.

ill add another few xplosions that i amde, going up from first made to my most recent. that on ewas my first.
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I liked it, maybe like some of the guys said, it expand a little slow.
But anyway i thought it was nice.

^^

Thaks Mynx <3
ILY ALL!

yeah and to make it fade away, start to make holes in the smoke starting from the bottom center and then more and more that join together until eventually everything disappears.

i have on mah other thread.
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Good for first.

Good for a first!