My pivots in '08

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joeyodaguy

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Apr 7, 2008 4:30 PM #110529
These are two of my pivots. I know they arent that good but I want to know whats wrong with them. C&C please.

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Click on them to make em work.

Lol, no ones replying. Are they so bad that youre embarassed for me? Yeah thought so.
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Apr 7, 2008 5:51 PM #110566
Firstly, it had no easing and it was very choppy. It had bad physics and the reaction was bad. I suggest going on some tutorials or checking out the work of pros to build up your skill.
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Apr 7, 2008 5:53 PM #110567
thanks, will do
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Apr 8, 2008 11:37 AM #111065
Try speeding your animations up a bit....
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Apr 8, 2008 5:59 PM #111185
The next one. I know it's short, but I quite like it.

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