my new sketches

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tobin12

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Apr 7, 2008 4:33 PM #110532
im tellin you now i did not make the first 2 up i have copied them of someone on the internet(not sure who?) but the rest are my ideas

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/8554/dscf0064to5.jpg

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/8955/dscf0065wt6.jpg

http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/5916/dscf0066dj6.jpg

http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/8184/dscf0067yk7.jpg
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Apr 7, 2008 11:13 PM #110719
First 3 you mean? I saw that same Assassin's creed picture though the folds in the cloths don't move in accord to the position of the person.
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Apr 8, 2008 1:12 AM #110815
You need to work of proportions and anatomy.
The arms don't match the torso. Looking mixed and matched.
Better shading wouldn't go a-miss.
They also looks kinda traced.

But, anywho.
Good work or whatever.
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Apr 8, 2008 4:11 PM #111138
Quote from body_in_the_lake
You need to work of proportions and anatomy.
The arms don't match the torso. Looking mixed and matched.
Better shading wouldn't go a-miss.
They also looks kinda traced.

But, anywho.
Good work or whatever.


im sorry but that kinda traced bit has really bugged me all day i think you should know that i didnt trace and if i did i would put them on a website
i thought i would show people how i could draw i dont mind people helpin me telling me its out of proportion but sayin some one traced that aint right but every one has there opion hey

cheers anyway
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Apr 8, 2008 8:45 PM #111261
He said they looked traced, as in, stop referencing. Draw more from your head. The one's you made up looked much better. If you try and reference you end up trying to get so close to the picture that you mess up anatomy or make scribbly wiggly lines that look like you just light box traced.
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Apr 9, 2008 9:53 AM #111656
yer i will i usually do anyway i will add some more