I don't think the beam charge thingy (or whatever it was hat got punched by an extending arm) looked right. The stick that did it just didn't sem in the mood if you know what I mean. I think a longer stance and doing something with the other arm would have improved it.
The other thing was when the guy fell over from a bird's eye view. A half way frame would have been better, I think, than just flipping straight over, although it would have been hard to make.
Besides that it was a nice use of effects and everything. I thought it was good.