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Oct 1, 2009 11:32 PM #494565
im sure everyone here has seen a reeces pieces commercial, and everyone knows thye are so delicious, well i made my 4th animation jsut that, its what might happen if you dont give your friend a piece

i belive this is my best animation so far, but it up to you SPP viewers to deicide :)

link (add the www if you want to view :) )

.swfcabin.com/open/1254437910
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Oct 1, 2009 11:38 PM #494570
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Oct 1, 2009 11:48 PM #494579
Now the main problem here is that I must watch this animation 10 times to be able to read all of the text shown in here. Look at your frames per second. It should be 12 if you haven't changed it. It's a good frame rate to have when you start out. This means there are 12 frames in 1 second. So to read 'Sup' at the beginning after the reader gets situated with the environment and knows where to look, it may take 1 to 2 seconds from the very beginning. So after 12 to 24 frames of 'sup' on the screen you should change to something else. It looks like you have 6-10 frames for each text block and that's far too fast for anyone reading to be able to read it. The more syllables in your text, the more time you have to have in the timeline.

Do you know how frames in the timeline work?
KeyFrame- the frames with the black dots in them. the hotkey to make one in the timeline is f6. They are frames that have a change in the animation.
Frame- The frames with nothing in them colored Gray if they have content and colored white if they have no content. The hotkey to make one of these is f5. They're exposure frames. they just keep the same image on the screen.
Blank Keyframe- if you're doing an animation drawing frame by frame, you'll want to make a lot of these. the hotkey is f7. They're keyframes that are white and have white dots in them.

Layers also factor in. Layers are best described as a stack of clear glass sheets. The one upmost on the timeline is the glass sheet on the top and it will cover everything below it. the opposite goes for the downmost layer.

Understand?
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Oct 1, 2009 11:50 PM #494581
yes, ill add mroe frames for the text and reupload it :)
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Oct 1, 2009 11:55 PM #494585
Heres the new updated edition so there is enouhg time to read text :)
w w w .swfcabin.com/open/1254439223
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Oct 2, 2009 12:06 AM #494592
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Oct 2, 2009 12:08 AM #494594
still a bit more duration on "RESSES PEANUT BUTTER CUP" and the ending text, but I think you understand what's to be learned form this.

Also allow me to direct you to our tutorials, mostly for flash. Before trying advanced stuff and animation take a hard look at some of the tuts that are referenced to and posted in this forum.