Here's a drawing i did yesterday. It got ripped in half, but i did a pretty good job patching it up with tape. Comment and give CC!

Note: the guy's sitting down but i did a crappy job doing the depth perception so it looks like he has tiny legs.

Wow, awesome. The detail and sketchiness is great.

Thanks brian c, thats how i wanted it to turn out.

Bump, come on i want some comments on this it took me an hour to make.

It's far to messy. Hard to see what's what. The lines aren't mirror'd. Meaning, something on the left side is totally different to the right (Obviously in places it should look the same).
Work on the "closer, further away" thing. So, if something's closer to the front, the shading wouldn't be as dark as the thing further back.

The sketchy-ness is horrid, In my opinion. Perhaps spend longer than an hour. Including breaks, work on shading and contrasting. Work on cleaner lining. If you want to keep the sketchy effect, fair enough, but make it slightly cleaner.