Fruitloops and toppless women!

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Apr 9, 2008 6:51 AM #111607
http://www.swfup.com/file/182509

A little short I'm working on. I absolutely love the red sticks movements, except for the last landing.
Best anim by me happy loopa doopa doo?
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Apr 9, 2008 7:44 AM #111614
it was actually pretty good.
some things that troubled me was when the white stick pushed the black one, it didnt flow well together with the kick.
also the tree in the background bugged me when the red stick appeared and started to move. It sort of blened in with it and made it difficult to see what was happening.

besides those two i thought it was great. nice style
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Apr 9, 2008 7:45 AM #111617
Is your pc brightness down or something? I can see the red stick moving just fine.
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Apr 10, 2008 6:59 AM #112376
Lul.
Stickskeleton.
It was good.
Continue.
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Apr 12, 2008 9:42 AM #113699
I liked when the dude turned into a skeleton that was really good effects
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Apr 12, 2008 10:46 AM #113741
I liked it too but the movements lacked force in my opinion.
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Apr 13, 2008 8:53 AM #114606
the red guy seems so small

and that he doesnt jump high, not even like 30cm

(and i know that it was since he was far in the background, still is small and small jump)
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Apr 13, 2008 2:51 PM #114722
Didn't look much like a kick, it seemed like the white stick speed jumped to the black, placed his foot behind the black stick's foot and shoved.

The rest was alright, but I suggest you up your brush smoothness by 5.
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Apr 13, 2008 4:02 PM #114764
I guess it wasn't that bad, but you need to work on your special effects and easing too. Good luck.