Gun fight test

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Oct 12, 2009 3:20 PM #499523
Just a test to see if I'm using the right effects for a gun fight (might be able to be developed into one long animation though)
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1255358389


Critics and comment please.
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Oct 12, 2009 3:23 PM #499526
The effects look nice, though the feet are a too big.
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Oct 12, 2009 4:38 PM #499549
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1255358389
The dust shouldn't dissipate so fast, and the stickman is stiff, because nothing except legs moved.
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Oct 13, 2009 11:19 AM #500077
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1255430344

Changed a few thing around to cover up some faulty thing that I can't edited due to the complication (a.k.a laziness) like the perfect walking, big feet/gun, short body's height....
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Oct 13, 2009 5:11 PM #500157
it was ok, the walk could use some more attention and from my point of view the dust is right. however, make the gun recoil and dont let him shoot in one go. make him do burst fires, its more realistic with such a gun :P
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Oct 13, 2009 7:41 PM #500221
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1255430344
you can edit your posts and put links in them
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Oct 13, 2009 7:52 PM #500223
i like your pages lol
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Oct 14, 2009 3:31 AM #500515
@Dark: I need more posts to include link in my post so...
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Oct 15, 2009 5:50 PM #501135
the legs look better but you still have to work on them