Looks like i got some competition here. (WIP)

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Oct 17, 2009 7:39 AM #501924
OH MY GOD EVERY SINGLE PERSON ON THIS FORUM IS BETTER THAN ME AT PIVOT WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH WHAT AM I GOING TO DO??!?

WORK IN PROGRESS (WIP): idk some fight (haven't animated in months bro)
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PIV:
http://pivotup.com/files/8hvcbqks.piv
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Oct 17, 2009 8:38 AM #501951
You are not that good as you think fool.

The blood was horrible
Doublefaming was Horrible
Chopy as hell.

And a chair isn't that light.

That thing he had at the start in his hands was useless.

I don't see any easing.

Overall :
Go to the beginner section.

:) Good luck
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Oct 17, 2009 12:50 PM #501998
You need to work on your blood, and don't double frame every movement - it looks choppy. There just weren't enough frames for the ammount of movement that was going on.

Edit: Ah. Poppet beat me to all of that. It still counts though, not to mention post count +1.
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Oct 17, 2009 6:16 PM #502131
lol.

some of my other stuff:

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Image (badly saved, it's supposed to be slower)
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Image (BTW, i made this whole animation, it was supposed to be a joint but the other guy gave up.)
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i have more, but i cbf to upload my whole pivot folder. have fun.
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Oct 17, 2009 6:25 PM #502133
1st one , I just could not understand that one.

2nd one , To fast that it looks chopy and newbish.

3rd one Look at the both up.

4th one Kinda like your first one. I don't like it.

5th one you could add a shot Fx , It its ok.

Last one is very creative , that one is my fav.

Keep practicing.
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Oct 17, 2009 7:02 PM #502153
That wasn't very impressive, not in the least. Poppet is better than you, megaanims is better than you almost anyone respectable is better than you. If you think I want to hear the arrogant spewing of your self proclaimed epicures you're sorely mistaken. I bluntly couldn't care less about how horrible you have the disillusion of imagining every other being on this site to be.
The animations where not very smooth or fluid, to say the least you need to work on your easing and movements which is as rudimentary as animating skill can get. Also, some are slow some are to fast? Just save them at 6 frame rate, it's simple. But that's just the half of it, all of your animations are too dull They all lack color and they're mostly too short. Though it seems like you put effort into it the physics are horribly and make no sense, I understand that they look like cartoons and probably intended so, however I think that you can do a far superior job than you are currently. I can not emphasize enough on progression, your animations don't seem to go anywhere (with the exception of the one for a collab). They all typically stay in the primary area you set. You should practice that along with all the basics for better effect. Keep trying and you will be great.
Medium beginner.
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Oct 17, 2009 7:22 PM #502173
Now see, only abbysal can insult someone like that.
that was a compliment.
And only the last animation was any good. and you can't make a walk or run for the life of you.
and you an asshole, for insulting EVERYONE on stickpage forum like that.
That wasn't a compliment.

I would have been nicer but...... You said everyone was crap.
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Oct 17, 2009 8:08 PM #502198
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That wasn't very impressive, not in the least. Poppet is better than you, megaanims is better than you almost anyone respectable is better than you. If you think I want to hear the arrogant spewing of your self proclaimed epicures you're sorely mistaken. I bluntly couldn't care less about how horrible you have the disillusion of imagining every other being on this site to be.
The animations where not very smooth or fluid, to say the least you need to work on your easing and movements which is as rudimentary as animating skill can get. Also, some are slow some are to fast? Just save them at 6 frame rate, it's simple. But that's just the half of it, all of your animations are too dull They all lack color and they're mostly too short. Though it seems like you put effort into it the physics are horribly and make no sense, I understand that they look like cartoons and probably intended so, however I think that you can do a far superior job than you are currently. I can not emphasize enough on progression, your animations don't seem to go anywhere (with the exception of the one for a collab). They all typically stay in the primary area you set. You should practice that along with all the basics for better effect. Keep trying and you will be great.
Medium beginner.


wow, you wrote a whole essay basically saying 'your animations suck'. oh, what wit and talent it took to add that extra 352 words to emphasize your point. you are a truly respectable member.
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Oct 17, 2009 8:24 PM #502211
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wow, you wrote a whole essay basically saying 'your animations suck'. oh, what wit and talent it took to add that extra 352 words to emphasize your point. you are a truly respectable member.


Ha, clearly more respectable than you. I at least have the intellect to realize when someone is criticizing and not. I just told you I don't care about how mentally handicap you really are, or how badass you are with your sun shades and hair waving in the wind. I do however understand sarcasm and I do think that maybe you should find more effective means of doing so. Perhaps you should actually attend fourth grade? Also, it was criticism dumbass and I was being nice, if you can't handle that then don't post a reply.
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Oct 17, 2009 8:29 PM #502215
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Ha, clearly more respectable than you. I at least have the intellect to realize when someone is criticizing and not. I just told you I don't care about how mentally handicap you really are, or how badass you are with your sun shades and hair waving in the wind. I do however understand sarcasm and I do think that maybe you should find more effective means of doing so. Perhaps you should actually attend fourth grade? Also, it was criticism dumbass and I was being nice, if you can't handle that then don't post a reply.


well look at you, i fixed the OP. i'll also remember to add color to my animations next time as that was the only valid point of your 'criticism'.
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Oct 17, 2009 8:32 PM #502218
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well look at you, i fixed the OP. i'll also remember to add color to my animations next time as that was the only valid point of your 'criticism'.

That was so amazing that I think my head exploded and criticism doesn't need a point it isn't a debate. But please continue ignoring your horrible physics, lack of smoothness and the fact that your overall inept at animating. Because those were just completely incorrect.
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Oct 17, 2009 8:33 PM #502220
You're not that good, nor bad. Work on addin'g easing more and your movements.

As for Abyssal, the ****? Just because I left the pivot section, doesn't mean you should take my place as being a ****ing douche. It won't help you by saying that other people are better than him. Say whether or not you like the animation, why you like it or why you dislike it, state some things that he should work on, and then leave. It's that easy.

Poppetj, lol wow. You're going to try and call someone else bad and flame them because you think they're not as good as you? I found his animations more entertaining than anything I've seen from you :/ Even if they're not considered good due to lack of easing and proper movements.
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Oct 17, 2009 8:34 PM #502221
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wow, you wrote a whole essay basically saying 'your animations suck'. oh, what wit and talent it took to add that extra 352 words to emphasize your point. you are a truly respectable member.

you should stop appearing like an arrogant cunt, just accept the C&C

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Ha, clearly more respectable than you. I at least have the intellect to realize when someone is criticizing and not. I just told you I don't care about how mentally handicap you really are, or how badass you are with your sun shades and hair waving in the wind. I do however understand sarcasm and I do think that maybe you should find more effective means of doing so. Perhaps you should actually attend fourth grade? Also, it was criticism dumbass and I was being nice, if you can't handle that then don't post a reply.


you should calm down a bit bro

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Oct 17, 2009 8:38 PM #502222
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you should stop appearing like an arrogant cunt, just accept the C&C



you should calm down a bit bro

loldragora

Don't worry I don't mind it when I get to argue. I am just trying to set him straight, I am not trying to be a douchebag I am simply trying to let him know he isn't that great.

Lol at dragora, you always just appear. How do you do it.
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Oct 17, 2009 8:45 PM #502228
I'm a ninja >:3