Ballad of Beowulf

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Oct 25, 2009 11:33 PM #506132
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nthc_C4f7BM

So yeah, this is mine. I spent 9 hours making it today.

It's pretty cool. You should watch it.

It's 7:48 seconds long though, if you don't have the time.

But you should. And it would be cool if you could watch it and compliment me.

That would be awesome.

I love you.

(The quality seems fine, but it's still processing)
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Oct 26, 2009 12:03 AM #506139
That was somewhat dull and somewhat funny




Meh
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Oct 26, 2009 12:06 AM #506140
Haha Schwa, wow. I respect the dedication, but the idea of doing it as a silent movie? Eh... I dunno. Decent editing job with a low amount of typos. I really, really liked the "CGI" you had. I don't even know how to do that yet.

Keep at it my friend. This is promising to say the least.
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Oct 26, 2009 12:41 AM #506150
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That was somewhat dull and somewhat funny




Meh


That's what we in the trade call dry humor ;)

And I'll take that as a compliment :D

@Real

About 3 hours of editing for that crap :p As you can tell for the second half of the dragon part I completely gave up.
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Oct 26, 2009 1:46 AM #506166
Yeah pretty good job overall. Even though you just half-assed the animation parts, teachers love that kind of stuff.

The fight scene with Grendel was pretty bad though. In the book, Beowulf is pretending to be sleeping, and then when Grendel comes to eat him, Beowulf grabs his arm and then rips it off and that's pretty much it. So basically you could have just done that instead of having a lame/embarassing fight scene that lasted like a whole minute.
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Oct 26, 2009 2:29 AM #506182
Im pretty sure it went on for about 3 minutes
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Oct 26, 2009 2:48 AM #506189
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Yeah pretty good job overall. Even though you just half-assed the animation parts, teachers love that kind of stuff.

The fight scene with Grendel was pretty bad though. In the book, Beowulf is pretending to be sleeping, and then when Grendel comes to eat him, Beowulf grabs his arm and then rips it off and that's pretty much it. So basically you could have just done that instead of having a lame/embarassing fight scene that lasted like a whole minute.


Actually I'm pretty sure that in the story it says something about them fighting for a significant amount of time before Beowulf rips his arm off.

Hey man, I was actually getting punched, I've also got bruises from being tackled D:

But yes, I realize the fight scene looks incredibly lame, but whatever.
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Oct 26, 2009 2:57 AM #506197
You should learn a martial art and do a fight scene, then it will be pretty badass
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Oct 26, 2009 3:15 AM #506203
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Actually I'm pretty sure that in the story it says something about them fighting for a significant amount of time before Beowulf rips his arm off.

Hey man, I was actually getting punched, I've also got bruises from being tackled D:

But yes, I realize the fight scene looks incredibly lame, but whatever.


If I remember correctly, Beowulf grabs his arm, Grendel tries to pull away, they have a brief struggle while Grendel tries to break Beowulf's grip, and then Beowulf rips his arm off.

Overall, the video was pretty decent and I'm sure you'll get a pretty good grade on it.
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Oct 26, 2009 8:00 PM #506382
Quote from Sparknotes
He tries to escape, but Beowulf wrestles him down. The combatants crash around the hall, rattling the walls and smashing the mead-benches. Grendel begins to shriek in pain and fear; the sound terrifies all who hear it. Beowulf’s men heroically hack at the demon as Beowulf fights with him, but no weapon on earth is capable of harming Grendel. Beowulf summons even greater strength and rips Grendel’s arm completely out of its socket.


Well, there is a fight going on. It might not be as long as I embellished, but whatever :/

Quote from The Battle
The mighty one, Beowulf, watched,
waiting to see how that wicked one
would go about starting.
Nor did the wretch delay,
but set about seizing
a sleeping warrior unawares
and bit into his bone locks,
drinking the streams of blood,
then swallowing huge morsels
of flesh. Quickly he ate that man,
even to his hands and feet.

Forward Grendel came,
stepping nearer. Then
he reached for Beowulf.

Beowulf grasped his arm
and sat up. The criminal
knew he had not met
in this middle-earth
another with such a grip.
Grendel's spirit was afraid
and his heart eager
to get away, to flee
to his hiding place, flee
to the devils he kept
for company. Never had he met
a man such as this.

Beowulf then kept in mind
the speeches he had made
in the evening and stood
upright, firmly grasping
Grendel's hand until
the fingers broke.

The monster strove to escape.
Beowulf stepped closer. That
famous monster suddenly wanted
to disappear into the fens.
He realized the power of those hands,
the wrathful grip he was in.
Grendel felt sorry
he had made a trip to Herot.

That hall of warriors dinned.
All the Danes of the city,
all the brave ones, feared disaster.
The building resounded.
It is a wonder the wine-hall
withstood the battle,
that the beautiful building
did not fall to the ground.
But it was made fast,
within and without,
with iron bands
forged with great skill.
I have heard say
many a mead bench
adorned in gold
went flying when
those hostiles fought.
No wise man had ever thought
that splendid building could
be damaged (unless a fire
should swallow it).

The din rose louder, the Danes stood
in dreadful terror--everyone
heard lamentation, a terrifying
song, through the wall:
Grendel, Hell's friend,
God's enemy, sang in defeat,
bewailing his wound.
That man, mightiest
of warriors alive, held fast.
He would not
for any reason
allow his murderous visitor
to escape alive,
to keep the days of his life.

Beowulf's warriors brandished
many a sword, inheritances
from the ancient days,
trying to protect their chief,
but that did no good: they
could not have known, those
brave warriors as they fought,
striking from all sides, seeking
to take Grendel's soul, that
no battle sword could harm him--
he had enchantment against
the edges of weapons.

The end of Grendel's life was
miserable, and he would travel
far into the hands of fiends.
Grendel, the foe of God, who had
long troubled the spirits of men
with his crimes, found that
his body could not stand against
the hand grip of that warrior.


So it seems to me that it goes on for a notable period of time :/
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Oct 26, 2009 8:07 PM #506385
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If I remember correctly, Beowulf grabs his arm, Grendel tries to pull away, they have a brief struggle while Grendel tries to break Beowulf's grip, and then Beowulf rips his arm off.

This man is right. We just did a unit on Beowulf in British Lit.

He did have a fight with Grendel's mom, though.
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Oct 27, 2009 6:52 PM #506729
I have now learned to fact check before you start something :p

I believe I screwed up in multiple areas, not royally, but I missed little things :/

I don't think my english teacher cared though. Which is good.