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Nov 7, 2009 2:46 PM #511029
http://darrenargo.deviantart.com/art/Getting-back-into-this-142793859

Usual, opened flash, made something short thats not all that entertaining and covered in pointless extras yet being posted anyway.
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Nov 7, 2009 2:49 PM #511030
Actually it was pretty good, apart from the last kick that lacked
-gravity
-easing
-timing
-force
-and the feel to it
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Nov 7, 2009 2:54 PM #511031
Quote from Tawnik
Actually it was pretty good, apart from the last kick that lacked
-gravity
-easing
-timing
-force
-and the feel to it


Yea, I'll make a note to work on kicks, I don't think I made a good kick animation, ever. Thanks.
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Nov 7, 2009 3:06 PM #511034
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=msbTN7YWlBg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lBMA2wWuqh8&feature=related

Both were leaning back when kicking, your stick is leaning forward, thats the biggest mistake that you made ;) stand up and try kicking yourself =) record it if you dont feel like you can tell whether you're leaning forward or backward.
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Nov 7, 2009 3:07 PM #511035
Nice flash... Don't know anything that was wrong in it.
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Nov 7, 2009 3:34 PM #511039
Quote from Tawnik
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=msbTN7YWlBg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lBMA2wWuqh8&feature=related

Both were leaning back when kicking, your stick is leaning forward, thats the biggest mistake that you made ;) stand up and try kicking yourself =) record it if you dont feel like you can tell whether you're leaning forward or backward.


I did martial arts, oh 2 years back, and I remember being told I lean into kicks to much and that that affecting my landing/balance.
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Nov 8, 2009 3:14 PM #511383
Was a nice animation. Very smooth, though the last kick is about 1/8 of a second long xD
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Nov 9, 2009 1:35 AM #511568
A bit stiff.. otherwise cool
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Nov 9, 2009 6:51 PM #511797
Quote from Miccool
A bit stiff.. otherwise cool


Thanks, but how do I make it not stiff? I'm kinda buggered on figuring that out.
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Nov 10, 2009 5:56 PM #512134
I really liked that animation dude ^^, since im new on to Flash, it was pretty good in my opinion, congrats!
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Nov 10, 2009 7:12 PM #512140
Very Nice Short, nice smooth animating, though I do agree with Tawnik, that last kick is Lacking.
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Nov 11, 2009 2:09 PM #512431
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Thanks, but how do I make it not stiff? I'm kinda buggered on figuring that out.


What I try to do is to always keep every ligament moving every frame, even if it's only a little bit.. dk, if it will help you though, but it certainly helps me.
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Nov 15, 2009 1:43 PM #513627
Nice anim, very smooth, but i think the body and the shadow were out of sync.
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Nov 15, 2009 2:22 PM #513635
Quote from 4RR0W
Nice anim, very smooth, but i think the body and the shadow were out of sync.


They go out of sync if you have a very slow computer and/or are using IE as I found out, the shadow skips ahead but if you play it from your desktop it shouldn't.
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