Calling all pros

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Apr 11, 2008 9:03 PM #113318
Plz I need you to rate these anims. Also C&C too.
Here are the links:
NB:All stks are by me except the bursts, the line of smoke and the pistol.
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x141/Jit_13/walking-1.gif

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x141/Jit_13/running.gif

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x141/Jit_13/jumping.gif

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x141/Jit_13/football.gif

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x141/Jit_13/gunning.gif

Thanx for lookin':Happy:
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Apr 11, 2008 9:25 PM #113325
The walking the legs are stiff and its a little choppy
The running is really choppy and really odd i dont like it
The jumping one. The first jump was off. waaaay off. The backflip was kinda nice but unrealistic. & the third just had not physics.

The rest seem choppy with bad movements.
Like add just a few key frames and some nice movements on the last one. and it will be good. Like really good.
keep working on them
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Apr 11, 2008 9:51 PM #113343
Thank you for the critisism, I tried real hard though...
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Apr 11, 2008 10:47 PM #113378
Quote from mactwok
Thank you for the critisism, I tried real hard though...


Yeah man
They're good
Improovemants can be made though :)
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Apr 11, 2008 11:10 PM #113397
Walk needs to unstraighten the back

Run less wobbly and better physics

GREAT blood for pivot, and even for flash. The last one was best.

There are no pros in pivot, just people who can't upgrade to Flash.

lol
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Apr 12, 2008 9:11 AM #113678
Could you give me some tips?
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Apr 12, 2008 12:25 PM #113829
its too unrealistic, the way he bops up and just slouches, but keep trying i guess.
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Apr 12, 2008 2:49 PM #113864
the last one had VERY good movements, if you improved the generalness of it it would be like, high begginer.
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Apr 12, 2008 6:25 PM #113988
also thats doodsy's blood, give him credit
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Apr 12, 2008 6:38 PM #113995
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the last one had VERY good movements, if you improved the generalness of it it would be like, high begginer.


umm no .
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Apr 12, 2008 6:41 PM #113998
sss, why don't you post an argument that could support your opinion?
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Apr 12, 2008 6:43 PM #114002
well,everyone were giving him good comments ,and i thought...those anims doesent look so good to me...maybe its my pc so i didint say anything
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Apr 13, 2008 3:11 PM #114735
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also thats doodsy's blood, give him credit


Umm, those are mine. I used lines and cicles. Look closely.
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Apr 13, 2008 3:12 PM #114736
no thats his blood from his default bashing, i asked him
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Apr 13, 2008 3:23 PM #114741
No its not, honestly.