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My part so far for the Shovel Collab

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Nov 21, 2009 4:05 AM #515175
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3109/68335_Blood_shovelSWF.php
Please leave feedback and help! Thanks :D
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Nov 21, 2009 4:50 AM #515198
Quite good. Only thing I see really is at the end when he pulls the shovel out of the wall, part of a dead body is still just kinda floating there
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Nov 21, 2009 5:02 AM #515203
Quote from Spleko
Quite good. Only thing I see really is at the end when he pulls the shovel out of the wall, part of a dead body is still just kinda floating there


That is still a work in progress, I'm going to get to that layer soon, here is an update with some gore in progress: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3109/71904_Blood_shovelSWF.php
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Nov 25, 2009 4:52 PM #517537
Very nice. Gore effects awesome.
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Nov 25, 2009 6:21 PM #517554
Very Nice, the only thing is when the guy from the left jumps off the ledge, he just goes in a straight line where you would have expected it to curve downwards... (did that make sense?)
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Nov 25, 2009 6:25 PM #517556
yeah I agree. Even though nobody's really looking over there the jump lacks the force of gravity.
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Nov 26, 2009 7:11 AM #517855
nice

after you fix that jump, add in some more
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Nov 27, 2009 2:20 AM #518096
The shovel looks more like a spoon, but then again that explains why your doing a stick figure animation...
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Nov 28, 2009 4:52 PM #518684
I liked it, it was all pretty smooth. Gore effects were very nice. Definitely need to fix that floating body before anything else imo, and to fix that jump, just have the stick jump up more and then fall to the same spot you had him in. Hope that helps :)
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