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Dec 1, 2009 11:17 PM #519908
I just made this animation 2 hours ago just wanted 2 show it tell me what you think :D.
THX.

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I just made the easing some better.

I just made the guy fly back faster and made the ball al little more eased.
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Dec 2, 2009 12:19 AM #519931
this should go in the beginners section, i gotta admit though, its not a bad loop, but it lacks easing and its stiff, physics are kinda off
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Dec 2, 2009 12:21 AM #519932
reactions need impact.


Off to begginers dude.
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Dec 2, 2009 12:53 AM #519948
Dam... It's like one thing goes wrong in an animation then you guys are like
"Back to the beginners"
But hey, I don't rule this place, nor am I a good animator so I can't say much
Btw, Dude that impact effect is hella sex.... Did you make it ur self O.o?
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Dec 2, 2009 12:39 PM #520111
Fu[SIZE="2"]c[/SIZE]k you all, this guy deserves his own thread.
Beginner's section my ass.

It looks good, the kick is just a bit uneased. Nice try at the effects.
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Dec 2, 2009 1:02 PM #520113
Thx gyohdon and yeah i made everything myseelfe i made some other anymations 2 but they are in an other thread look at those before you send me 2 beginner.
Besides i don't know if your good animators but zed doesn't mind me posting here.
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Dec 2, 2009 6:06 PM #520149
Zed doesn't rule the section either. But one day...

Tbh, I didn't think it was too bad. Maybe a bit short for it's own thread - one thread with lots of animations like this may be better - but the only real problems were that the ball wasn't quite eased enough as it stopped and the guy's reaction should have sent him flying back faster - there was one frame after he was hit where he didn't move very much and I think that was most of the problem. Possibly the run pushes back too much for the speed he's doing, although that could be compensated for by a moving camera.
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Dec 2, 2009 7:13 PM #520164
Well thx but I stil don't know how 2 juse camera or wathever its called. So if you could help me whit that i would be very pleased.

And what I meaned with Zed doesn't mind is that your a goood animator and you don't mind me posting here :D.
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Dec 2, 2009 7:32 PM #520171
Quote from unkn0wnx
Well thx but I still don't know how to use camera or whatever it's called. So if you could help me with that I would be very pleased.

And what I meant with Zed doesn't mind is that your a good animator and you don't mind me posting here :D.

Fix'd grammar and stuff.

If you would come over in a couple of days, I'll help you with camera-movement.

Also, the ball should've bounced. I didn't notice it at first, but it just fell on the ground like a bowlingball.

And Zed isn't really that great as an animator. Good, compared with what roams this section nowadays, but not great.
Tsk, if everyone would just know the good ol' days.
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Dec 3, 2009 10:07 AM #520424
I did make the ball bounce in my last edit of the animation. :D
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Dec 3, 2009 8:07 PM #520495
Just some minor twitches, but it looks better now.

:)
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Dec 3, 2009 9:49 PM #520516
Possibly a little jittery, yeah. I'd personally have said it was ok on bouncing but should have rolled further, but this way would work just as well. It could maybe use a few extra frames to ease the top of the bounce.
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