After reading many tutorials I made this. I added sounds but it got screwed up so i took it out

antiup.net/files/555183042241st%20Flash%20EVER%20(2).swf

Please tell me what i need to improve on and such
I cant host url because i dont have 20 posts

If anyone can host for me that would be awesome

Post the actual text to the link? just put a space in the link with the http:// in it like you're not a braindead, wheelchair-bound pathetic tub of lard aids hero playing with his own fecies.

I ****ed your mom.

love, Kitsune

PS:Go for swfCabin.com, Swfup.com, swfupload.com, or anything else. Not youtube. Antiup is fine.

Quote from Kitsune

Post the actual text to the link? just put a space in the link with the http:// in it like you're not a braindead, wheelchair-bound pathetic tub of lard aids hero playing with his own fecies.

I ****ed your mom.

love, Kitsune

PS:Go for swfCabin.com, Swfup.com, swfupload.com, or anything else. Not youtube. Antiup is fine.

I didnt do youtube tho O.o so how was it?

erm... for your first it's pretty good. Just a bit choppy when he jumps... He graphics are actually good.

Quote from T4x4R_O*_Hawk2

erm... for your first it's pretty good. Just a bit choppy when he jumps... He graphics are actually good.

Cool thanks, can you help me how to jump better? a tut maybe?

just work on blood and physics
and u will be awesome

Quote from rx00worth

just work on blood and physics
and u will be awesome

Physics? Can you tell me where I lack physics?

Well,
for first it was great (for first). It needs more easing and anticipation when he jumps. Also reaction of the hitted stick isn't good too. Goodluck, I see potential.
(Ow, and jump tutorial: http://www.swfup.com/file/12202 )

bump bump bump bump bump