Two badass animations for you

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Dec 12, 2009 11:34 AM #523688
http://filebox.me/view/t89axizf1


http://filebox.me/view/0z4s7utwg

C&C approved.
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Dec 13, 2009 12:08 AM #523911
C&C approved? How can you approve C&C if you haven't even got any?

Anyway, stiff, choppy, not much to say
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Dec 13, 2009 2:18 PM #524156
cause I dont care what you say as long as its C&C and not offtopic spam shit.
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Dec 13, 2009 2:26 PM #524161
Besides that the head disappeared on the fullbody, and the force of the block hitting the squid wasn't so great, they were awesome, and certainly MUCH better than anything Vendetta could do.
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Dec 15, 2009 1:35 PM #524848
Any more crits or just the two?
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Dec 15, 2009 3:36 PM #524863
yeah basically what N T said. and it wasn't choppy like vendetta said.
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Dec 17, 2009 6:41 PM #525430
Honestly, this should be in the beginners thread :/
Do you know what easing is? Do you know what proper spacing is?
You also need to brush up on your drawing skills.

the "full-body" made no sense at all. It just looked like a crappy figure attempting to move. We should be able to see what you're going for in your aniamtion. If someone asks you what happened, or what something is, then you should know that you need work.

Also, learn to self critique yourself.

Edit, I'm loving the thread name. It's very misleading.
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Dec 18, 2009 12:01 AM #525506
@Vile: Honestly, approved? either you mean appreciated or you're a wannabe superior

@N T : Getting someone who said a vague comment abount an animation and pointing out there views, and putting them down because of it? what are you? in preschool?

First one pretty much had nothing to C&C except some extremely un-detailed Bgs.

Second one was ok, very poorly exectued easing, force was awful. Just keep at it.
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Dec 18, 2009 11:30 PM #525734
Grubber! My love! =D
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Dec 19, 2009 12:42 AM #525756
Quote from Sunder Forge
@Vile: Honestly, approved? either you mean appreciated or you're a wannabe superior


He's from Shiftlimits. What do you expect?

Anyway, the squid was sort of cool for its one forward pump, but the box had no presence. The other one was an odd figure and then some stick figure backgrounds. Keep trying, look up easing in the tutorials, and prehaps start with simpler animations until you've developed some more skill.