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My first walk

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Dec 17, 2009 6:11 PM #525422
Hey everybody this is my first walk. I learned some moves from the tutorials that members posted in the forum.

P.S.: Can u give some advise to make my walks better ?
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Dec 17, 2009 6:55 PM #525433
maybe search up pivot walk tutorial on google or look for one on the forums....
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Dec 17, 2009 8:29 PM #525443
He said he'd looked at them already.

@SDR: You need to watch the foot placement and start straightening out the front leg once it's past the foot on the ground. Besides that I think it's just smoothing.
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Dec 18, 2009 11:33 AM #525626
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He said he'd looked at them already.

@SDR: You need to watch the foot placement and start straightening out the front leg once it's past the foot on the ground. Besides that I think it's just smoothing.


ok but can u give me the link about foot placement please ?
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Dec 18, 2009 1:04 PM #525632
well that part is pretty easy (look at the onion skin/grey outline frome previous frame and make sure the foot that is placed on the ground stays in the same spot)
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Dec 18, 2009 3:18 PM #525640
I made A better walk video and I made better foot placements.

Is this walk good?
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Dec 18, 2009 3:58 PM #525642
It's better. You still need to straighten the front leg out a bit more. Also, try not to let his body slow down too much between each stride. To do that the front leg should be moving backwards before it hits the ground.
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Dec 18, 2009 5:21 PM #525647
You also need to work on easing on your hands. That means slowing down before coming to a stop....its kinda like stopping in a car or any object that moves and stops (without hiting another solid object like a wall).
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Dec 21, 2009 4:22 PM #526684
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It's better. You still need to straighten the front leg out a bit more. Also, try not to let his body slow down too much between each stride. To do that the front leg should be moving backwards before it hits the ground.

I tried to straighten the leg a little bit more and this is the result.
But I think that the walk before was better.
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Dec 21, 2009 6:03 PM #526714
I've edited the foot placements and the arms and this is the result.

P.S.: I need someone who can learn me all the basics of pivot.
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Dec 21, 2009 6:11 PM #526723
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I've edited the foot placements and the arms and this is the result.

P.S.: I need someone who can learn me all the basics of pivot.

If you go to piovt tutorials right here on stickpage then look for zeds tutorial then that teaches you all the basics. If you can't find it on the first page then look on the second one.
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Dec 21, 2009 6:21 PM #526726
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If you go to piovt tutorials right here on stickpage then look for zeds tutorial then that teaches you all the basics. If you can't find it on the first page then look on the second one.

I already did that ghostly. I just read his easing tutorial and practiced it on pivot. I put the result on a new treath.
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Dec 22, 2009 12:38 PM #527094
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I tried to straighten the leg a little bit more and this is the result.
But I think that the walk before was better.


I don't mean the leg on the floor - I mean the leg in the air. It needs to be straighter before it hits the floor (although it's about right as it's going past the other leg). I think you also need to push the leg on the ground back further before picking it up if that makes sense.
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Dec 23, 2009 5:06 PM #527663
I edited the walk
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Dec 23, 2009 5:08 PM #527664
well..........


im still learning the basics of pivoy.... i'd say i may be a tad better than you...
so i can give you a few pointers if you want?seeing you asked for it a page back.
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