Here's my Entry for my my Dodgeball Comp.


I know it's stiff in a few places but what do you think? oh, and could someone rank me please?

I'm going back to refusing to rank people on principles (that principle being that ranks are silly) but I'll cc some.

In the places where you jump you need more anticipation. Often it looks more like they simply fly up than push off the ground. The other problem was bits of stiffness, generally around the telekinesis stuff. Besides that I suspect it will win you the competition.

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I'm going back to refusing to rank people on principles (that principle being that ranks are silly) but I'll cc some.

In the places where you jump you need more anticipation. Often it looks more like they simply fly up than push off the ground. The other problem was bits of stiffness, generally around the telekinesis stuff. Besides that I suspect it will win you the competition.

yeah I agree about the stiffness. but there was only one jump I think.(other than the back hand spring) the other times they were supposed to be flying. but I do see what you mean about the actual jumps.

Edit: what could I do with the telekinesis to make if less stiff. what should I move and how should I move it?

Yeah, the handspring's what I meant. And try stepping forwards when he's levitating the three balls.

hmmm. that would work

I think the only other issue is foot placement. Aside from that it's a nice piece of animating.