http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=71113173276Brute.swf

Filters raped the ending, so I need help on how to redo it.
Normal help with movements choreoraphy etc is needed desperately too

I liked it like I said, but adding sounds will boost the animation a 100x D:

didnt like the end, a round thing, and lag and boom, animation stopped =p

BUT YEAH I REPLIED BECAUSE I OWN! >:3 jk jk /brag >:\ keep it up, and remmember I rejected you my love.

yeah add sound and it'll be a lot better.
O~O and the end was a little weird, but the animation was cool. nice blood style

Did SSJBryando really get banned?

XD

The movements were okay, but need some fixing. The blood was fine but it's just a lot of small lines, dark red and red. :/

Impressive and appealing, yet somewhat heavily flawed imo.

The moves were very soft, no force, as i bet if you took the vcam out, they'd look like taps.

The blood on the walls shouldn't bee there, as i wasn't able to see the actual animated blood.

Some movements were wayy to fast, as when he threw the guy at another guy (i didn't even know there was another guy.)

The physics were off when he caught the guy in the air.

and you need to work on your effects lol.

sounds would also give it an added touch.


this was harsh crit, but you need to know cuz you're gonna be really good...
so good job.

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Impressive and appealing, yet somewhat heavily flawed imo.

The moves were very soft, no force, as i bet if you took the vcam out, they'd look like taps.

The blood on the walls shouldn't bee there, as i wasn't able to see the actual animated blood.

Some movements were wayy to fast, as when he threw the guy at another guy (i didn't even know there was another guy.)

The physics were off when he caught the guy in the air.

and you need to work on your effects lol.

sounds would also give it an added touch.


this was harsh crit, but you need to know cuz you're gonna be really good...
so good job.

Thanks.
I can take harsh criticism, dont worry.
How can I improve the force of the hits? I try but I honestly have no clue of how to add force.

I know the effects sucked and the physics sucked sometimes.

Also, does anyone know a good site for sounds?

Try having a bigger gap between the enemy, then in the next frame *BAM!*

Also use a touch of blur, helps sometimes.

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and you need to work on your effects lol.

This coming from Tman.


But I actually agree with alot that he said, most of the hits were really weak, and the sticks that were coming in seemed to appear from nowhere. The effect at the end and his energy sword thing were pretty weird.

The black blur thing you used on the edges of the animation could've been removed. They didn't add much in my eyes.

Edit: shut up James, blurring movements can kill an animation if you don't use them exactly right. Plus i think Mesmay has a better grasp on framing and anticipation then you.

Maybe. But soon I will beat him =)

Nice name, lol.

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Did SSJBryando really get banned?

XD

The movements were okay, but need some fixing. The blood was fine but it's just a lot of small lines, dark red and red. :/

Can't you tell I'm a bad bad boy... ;) *big wink*

Yeah I noticed, forgot the say, the moves where pretty soft yeah, thats why i said sounds would make it feel heavier, makes it feel like the hit is harder. You beat mesmay? Your additude has changed :O nice.

lol seriously? .

So THIS is where you've been mesmay? Animatin somethin epic I see. But Yeah, Tman got it all down for you. I love it, keep it up.

i love the way he crushes him with his ''HEAD''

Quote from James Moer

Maybe. But soon I will beat him =)

Nice name, lol.

i hate you again already.
I prefer NC.

Oh ok, That's at least better T_T