how are my weps?

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Dec 22, 2009 9:02 PM #527213
hey guys im new to flash and i was drawing some weapons in it. and i want your opinon

ht tp://www.truploader.com/view/663832

and wich ones look better, with the outline or without the outline?
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Dec 22, 2009 9:07 PM #527217
With the outline, definitely. Better than any weaps I've managed to make.
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Dec 22, 2009 9:47 PM #527226
http://www.truploader.com/view/663832
They are better with outlines.
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Dec 22, 2009 9:49 PM #527227
alright thanks guys ^.^
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Dec 22, 2009 10:20 PM #527236
Eh. their too boxy ish. they look really weird and the proportions are also a little off. make sure the magazines have a curve, dont just have a sharp angle in the middle of it. the pistols barrel is too long and a little too thin. the stock on the AK looks really sharp and maybe a bit too small.

then again, for an animation, i spose their fine :}
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Dec 22, 2009 11:50 PM #527269
I like those without outlines, add more shading and some definition to the shape and you have pretty good weapons ;)