my first xD

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Dec 24, 2009 11:59 PM #528261
how strange that i posted my second first anyway this is ma first animation strangely i think its smoother than my second :s

http://www.truploader.com/uploads/725469myfirsteasytoonsanimation.gif
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Dec 25, 2009 3:48 AM #528338
Decent. Pretty smooth and nicely done. Maybe make it a bit faster.
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Dec 25, 2009 6:34 AM #528375
Wobbly but its getting better, the particles should be more defined and the scribbly lines have to go. You've got a good sense of attack. Maybe also speed up the black flashes, Make each black frame only last for half as long as the rest, makes it look better.
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Dec 25, 2009 6:56 AM #528379
k thanks ill make shore to do that and uknow for some strange reason my stick figures are only wobbly in easytoons i got flash today and it wasnt wobbly at all! but that doesnt mean im changing from easytoons
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Dec 25, 2009 7:48 AM #528401
orly? have you posted any of your flashes?
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Dec 25, 2009 3:53 PM #528517
no but im gonna soon not done withem yet oh my gosh im done yep still wobbly :S i dont think i can change that only way is unless i use line and line sucks!!
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Dec 26, 2009 1:08 PM #528799
Nope, it can be changed, just take your time, a rushed anim is a crap anim. If it wobbly just do it over n over till it looks right.
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Dec 26, 2009 3:49 PM #528822
Actually I thought it was decent, I really liked the idea you did with the sword. I just might take it.