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Jan 3, 2010 6:20 PM #532489
Right, I think I'm continueing with easytoon, so I decided to make some for you to give me some nice HELPFUL crit on :D

I started ez (the program) mid decemeber time.

Recently before New years I made these two.

I call this one: FxFail

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And this one is called: SwordThingWithBadEasing.

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Then I had a week break, and made one more, which I think is better =)

InterestingCombo:

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Critty and helpful stuff please! And comments that will make me feel nice :P
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Jan 3, 2010 6:33 PM #532498
Looks pretty awesome.
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Jan 3, 2010 10:52 PM #532625
wicked. I love your style
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Jan 4, 2010 11:33 AM #532849
Thanks for the comments guys :D

Anyone got any tips, or things that I should animate?
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Jan 4, 2010 11:57 AM #532851
yes......

A large movie of about, saaaaaaay 40 minuits in length for my mindless veiwing pleasure =)
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Jan 4, 2010 12:00 PM #532853
I like the 2nd one. T' would be better if he would slice his head off.
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Jan 4, 2010 1:33 PM #532877
Quote from Kieran.
Right, I think I'm continueing with easytoon, so I decided to make some for you to give me some nice HELPFUL crit on :D

I started ez (the program) mid decemeber time.

Recently before New years I made these two.

I call this one: FxFail

Image

And this one is called: SwordThingWithBadEasing.

Image



Then I had a week break, and made one more, which I think is better =)

InterestingCombo:

Image



Critty and helpful stuff please! And comments that will make me feel nice :P

FxFail:
I think it's not fail...
it's just unfinished and a bit confusing =_=

SwordThingWithBadEasing.:
not bad easing, just a bit weird easing :P
I like it, if only u finished the second slash and add the easing
and add more force >=3


InterestingCombo:
like it :D
like u said, intresting combo :)
just major resizing
and a bit lazyness huh?
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Jan 4, 2010 3:44 PM #532912
Quote from band_it
FxFail:
I think it's not fail...
it's just unfinished and a bit confusing =_=

SwordThingWithBadEasing.:
not bad easing, just a bit weird easing :P
I like it, if only u finished the second slash and add the easing
and add more force >=3


InterestingCombo:
like it :D
like u said, intresting combo :)
just major resizing
and a bit lazyness huh?


Yea, confuseing and wierd.

Okay, Ill try to add force into my next animations.

Yea, resizeing is a bitch for me. (And lazyness)

Thanks for the crit ;P

Thanks to everyone else for their helpful comments :D
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Jan 4, 2010 10:32 PM #533068
I liked the first one, just needs finishing.

only gripe I had was at the end of the third one, the way he landed from the flip, straight into the run was really unfluid.
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Jan 4, 2010 10:46 PM #533073
Yea, I noticed that too :P

But I didn't know how to stop it.
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Jan 4, 2010 10:51 PM #533076
Just noticed... Kerian's and TDW's styles look alike. Ahhh, what the hell, still why there's no head in SwordThingWithBadEasing
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Jan 4, 2010 10:52 PM #533078
Mhmm, yea i've changed style now and made a new thread, so ima lock this now.