improving?

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Jan 17, 2010 7:12 PM #537759
http://www.truploader.com/view/347746
my third fight lately, after taking a huge break from animating. What do you think? Should I continue this? Am i improving at all? 24 fps
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Jan 17, 2010 7:20 PM #537761
Really good overall.
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Jan 17, 2010 7:28 PM #537767
thanks! :D any CC?
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Jan 17, 2010 9:36 PM #537819
You're definitely improving, but the movement are still a little off and you should work on stick figure construction. Try using the brush tool maybe?
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Jan 17, 2010 10:14 PM #537827
Their arms look really short in comparison to the rest of the body, and they seem to come out of the middle his head rather than the shoulders/neck area
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Jan 17, 2010 10:23 PM #537831
Quote from LN3uq
Their arms look really short in comparison to the rest of the body, and they seem to come out of the middle his head rather than the shoulders/neck area


Exactly. That's what I was trying to get at with stick construction.
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Jan 17, 2010 11:50 PM #537873
ok thanks both of you!
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Jan 18, 2010 12:02 AM #537878
keep practicing, you're improving fast.
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Jan 18, 2010 12:45 AM #537895
ill have another one up by the end of the night :D
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Jan 18, 2010 12:49 AM #537897
Nice, It'll be cool to see. Still say you need to straighten out your kicks more because I don't know if I'm retarded but I don't kick with my leg bent that way
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Jan 18, 2010 1:29 AM #537917
haha, ya ur right mstick. Ok, ill continue this and try to use what you all said.
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Jan 18, 2010 2:01 AM #537932
Yea alright post it when your done I want to see